I found this story late yesterday and got ssssooooo excited!
I check constantly for an update from you. And now you certainly haven't disappointed. This is brisk and exciting. Everything that I expect from you.
It's fasinating in the way of all your other stories,( which, by the way, I hope you finish at some stage.....) Its full with vivid imagination, the characters are believable, well rounded and totally awesome!!!!
Can't wait for tomorrow when the next chap is up. (The bonus of knowing that the first 11 chapters are submitted is really exciting!)
The darkies!! And they're sexing it up too, of course xD Gotta say, so far there is a Lot of talking, But the characters pull it off, and i Like it!! Sometimes it takes a while to say what yah need to, othertimes, like Rachel says, you can say it all with a look.
Felching ftw!! (Maybe..?? Iono, its...)
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I found this story late yesterday and got ssssooooo excited!
I check constantly for an update from you. And now you certainly haven't disappointed. This is brisk and exciting. Everything that I expect from you.
It's fasinating in the way of all your other stories,( which, by the way, I hope you finish at some stage.....) Its full with vivid imagination, the characters are believable, well rounded and totally awesome!!!!
Can't wait for tomorrow when the next chap is up. (The bonus of knowing that the first 11 chapters are submitted is really exciting!)
Nicci
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The darkies!! And they're sexing it up too, of course xD Gotta say, so far there is a Lot of talking, But the characters pull it off, and i Like it!! Sometimes it takes a while to say what yah need to, othertimes, like Rachel says, you can say it all with a look.
Felching ftw!! (Maybe..?? Iono, its...)
Fun!
A very fun chapter, loving your unique personalities.
Jason
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