I have read all your stories and I enjoy them so much. You have pulled me into this one and I just can't stop thinking about it even after I have finished a chapter
I found when I was trying to sort out 'what goes where' and 'does this go before that,' that it would be easier to divvy it up into divisions, hence the book of the Mountain Clan, etc. Trying to keep events which occur far from each other in the right order is a challenge.
That's why I switch from one book to the next from one chapter to another if I'm going to leave one group to go to another for a while. I would normally had just put in a heading that said where we are, but that won't work on a world where a lot of place names have been forgotten - or they're just being mispronounced, such as 'Lozenjellis'. So if you see "Book of the Merren Part whatever", you'll know that this chapter deals with one set of characters. If one set of people from one book end up joining those from another, I'll end one book.
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I have read all your stories and I enjoy them so much. You have pulled me into this one and I just can't stop thinking about it even after I have finished a chapter
You know what they say...
Mother knows best!
Where is Book of the Meren Pt 4?
And when are you going to introduce Nah'Leen's guardian? She was the Deathhound in the Prologue wasn't she? Please continue this arc soon.
Where is Book of the Merren Pt 4? It's next.
I found when I was trying to sort out 'what goes where' and 'does this go before that,' that it would be easier to divvy it up into divisions, hence the book of the Mountain Clan, etc. Trying to keep events which occur far from each other in the right order is a challenge.
That's why I switch from one book to the next from one chapter to another if I'm going to leave one group to go to another for a while. I would normally had just put in a heading that said where we are, but that won't work on a world where a lot of place names have been forgotten - or they're just being mispronounced, such as 'Lozenjellis'. So if you see "Book of the Merren Part whatever", you'll know that this chapter deals with one set of characters. If one set of people from one book end up joining those from another, I'll end one book.
Moms
are awsome, even when they are daemons.
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