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The Audition Ch. 03

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by Anonymous08/13/12

The story is certainly different but quite enjoyable; I think a few more chapters are in order. Its certainly a story plot that has many open questions and ideas of what could happen in the future. Thank you.

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by Anonymous08/13/12

Looking forward to the twist

You have to have a twist in here... Hope things continue with Gwen's family after there married & all of them get the money... Interesting story

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