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Impressive
Always an interesting angle when JB shares one, but this was so very cleverly done. And still hot.
Unique
Kudos for the unique approach and erotic content. But like many of the contestants on that popular game show I wish you would have bought a few more vowels.
Alphabet Soup
Maybe I'm a lazy reader, but all these G's and Q's and X's and Y's were so cumbersome I felt llike I was working instead of enjoying myself.
What a concept!
Well, sure all those consonants were a bit of work - but it just adds to the fun. I couldn't G trying to work it all out!
replace acronyms with real words
This is a story, not a text message.
If you want people to read the story without getting ticked off and abandoning it (like I did) then USE REAL WORDS instead of letters and acronyms!
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