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Parent-Teacher Conference Ch. 11

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/14/12

The story and characters are interesting, but the shortness of the chapters is becoming frustrating. I don't think I've ever complained about length as I generally appreciate that authors are sharing their stories with everyone. But at the same time, it's starting to feel like lots of little teasers instead of chapters in a story.

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by teranmc08/14/12

good story

It has really drawn me in.

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by lozinit08/15/12

I have to agree with the other person who posted, the chapters are not really chapters just teasers. The parenthesis () also broke the flow of the story.

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by bowhunter567004/30/14

Great story!

Girl you left me hanging.

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