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WACC STORY 1 star.
Why continue?
Just another run-of-the-mill cluck story written by a sicko for similar sicko's. Crawl back into your hole author.
Great Story
Don't read so much into the other people replys. They seem to think this is the place to read best seller books. Truth is, it's the place to read fuck stories and yours was great. Can't wait to see the rest of it.......
good
I am looking forward to read what else happens here and what other exploits the wife can get into.
Keep it going
Ignore the trolls who read the stories and berate the authors for supplying them with jerk material. Looking forward to what Maria gets into!
re: Keep it going & Great Story
Funny. THEY comment on the story, but you bozos comment on the right of others to have different opinions -- and yet they're the trolls?
Ya like the story? Fine. Say so and let others have their own opinions. If you don't like that, maybe YOU'RE the ones who shouldn't be here.
wonderful story
I'm not a cuck. Love to watch the wife suck and fuck. It's good for her and for me. We share the cocks and what they leave behind
The last commentator needs to realise what and who it is can another willing pathetic cuck tell it what it is so it knows and what it's whore cunt wife is? it doesn't seem to know.
Fulfilling *his* fantasies?
The problem here is that Maria had no way to guarantee he'd follow her. Let's be honest: Maria wanted to get fucked by Marcus and Derek, and she's just using her husband's online activity as a 'get out of jail free' card when he catches them out.
Getting hot...
The story is getting hot, and I like it. As a newbie to the site, I'd like to try entering my own admissions of lust and I hope to do as well. ...Misty
re: The last commentator needs to realise...
Would you mind repeating that in English?
another story with no fucking thought or effort
seriously nully if you couldn't come up with all the huge fucking illogical holes in this story, then you are nothing but a fucking moron! You've insulting both your own pride, and your readers. If you don't care enough to put some thought into your postings, then don't waste everyone's time. A STUPID story is NEVER erotic under ANY conditions.
The story is rushed.
Becareful for what you wish for. Is that what they say? Sounds like cuckolds wife is getting everything she is dreaming of. And cuckold is in way over his head.
gay cuckold shit
story ruined by gay cuckold shit.
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