All Comments on 'Happy Birthday to Me'

It seemed like it was more about the gals' fantasies and pleasure than Frank. Sure, he got off, but in a very limited & controlled way.

(you need an editor, or at least a proofreader - the typos are distracting)

First. this was a really great story! I loved the vivid sex. The other reader has a point about spelling and grammar, but it didn't spoil anything for me. Keep writing!

What an inspiring story... Crazy fun and brilliantly visual. More please.