A New Living Situation Ch. 05

Short but

Excellent. Five stars. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the ending

I am glad that you ended it, but the beginning of their story is so great that it needed more development. This chapter was a "let me finish it" moment.

Rushed!

You killed a really good story line by rushing it!

This is so hard for me to say

Usually I love your work so so much but this time I must agree it was rushed. Seems so much not like you so I'll try to chalk it up to things happening in your life. Can't wait for your next story.

:'(

why it so short?

Different.....I like different.

This was out if the norm and I liked it.

I'm glad she finished a story. Her blog stated that she didn't do endings.

good

i hated some parts but good i love how she left him for some time he need that to come to terms with his self and then she for gave him and he doing so much better now

wow

Loved it... it was truly sweet..thank you for sharing

Seriously??? Dafuq?! No character development. It took the whole story to find out Alex's eyes are blue and I have no idea what he fell in love with about Bella. Why did she marry her rapist? This story was as shallow as an MTV reality about young supposedly glamourous people. That's sad because the premise had promise if the effort had been put in to think about how the characters behaved and why.

Loved it!

I loved this story. It was hot as hell, would't have minded it being a little longer, but still it was a great story. Good job.

Fuck by Anonymous
06/15/15

Story was amazing he didn't rape her it was mutual. Story was amazing loved it