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mattswifemattswifeover 11 years ago
Blah blah blah

Nothing new or different here.

MissKay77MissKay77over 11 years ago
Not bad

Not bad but I didn't like the sobbing part. Sobbing is not a turn on.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 11 years ago
that helps

instead of making such a disparaging comment, mattswife, how about you give some constructive criticism - like be specific in the observations. better yet, write and submit (no pun) a piece of your own. let's see if you can come up with something new.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
So sexy

I am so wet. I might need a new pair of panties.

mmmm

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