by Sappho100
Congratulations on your first story. I found it very realistic. I'd be very curious to see how you could develop it into a series. Specifically, how does having sucked his friends change the nature of his relationship with them and his wife? Is there a shift in the power balance? What's next? Keep writing!!!!
Very good for your first story. I need to find a poker game like that.
Really loved this story, especially when he comes in his own pants without having to touch himself. That got me super horny
If writing more, be true to your instincts.
Thanks for your comments. I will be continuing the story. In fact I originally had the first two parts written. I was not happy with the second part and rewrote it. I will be giving it another pass before sending to the editor.
seems like a great way to pay off a debt.
I know I wouldn't mind
Good story, nice story line and very arousing. You had a few grammar mistakes (one right at the beginning) but other than that it was a great job. Keep it up, you are well on your way to becoming a great hot erotica author.
This story woke me up. I sometimes fantasize about sucking multiple cocks. The idea of "being used" a little was a turn on; I think personally I'd be more submissive than dominant.
Would be great to get the wife's involved. Sucking off your friends in front of their
and your wife would be very hot. Invite me next time you want to play cards.
We can raise the stakes even higher.
We decided to break up can go many ways. Break up as in end the marriage or relationship? End the party? End what? The guy's realizing that he had turned into a submissive bottom and they using him more and more submissively with his relationship ending would make for a great next chapter. Break up has an open door feel to it.