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Aww...
This one made me sad. I really wanted the 3 to make it to the island & live out their lives blissfully f***ing their minds out.
~LadySilverNova~
I understand the sticky note feeling
You end up looking at your screen one day and thinking, "What the hell am I doing?"
Am I missing something?
What was with monnie? Had she died and become something else?
Great story, totally appreciate finding it each day
That Sticky Note Feeling
I know! And the stupid things are supposed to help you organize.
Instead, my monitor just looks like it's a distant relation to Big Bird.
Missing something?
I thought that I left enough to guess. Slow crawl toward shadows, light-shy, etc.
missing something
...err... yeah. The evil guy made her into a vampire.
Sticky note feeling:
I ended up putting little see-through bookmark stickies onto my sticky notes to tell me how important the note was:
0 sticky-tabs = rank 5
1 color sticky = rank 4
2 color stickies = rank 3
3 color stickies = rank 2
4 color stickies = rank 1
I thought it was kinda sad that I needed stickies... for my stickies. My monitor looked like a 5 colored porcupine. *shudders* Uhhhhh....
So, I decided to start keeping my notes in a document on my computer, and in journals... and notebooks, pads of paper, random scraps of paper.... crap.
I just realized I'm not as organized as I thought I was.
So sad
I hope Billy got that stupid ass vampire that caused all of this!
What a twist!
Was kinda sad and funny at the same time but im glad it was billy who was the younger brother who survived. Anyways though it was completely unexpected i think there are more possibilities now with billy travelling around. If they were on the island they'd have been killed b4 they could to to the merren demon lol
Sad and unexpected, but well done.
Very impressive twist, definitely made me wince with sadness for the lost opportunity of love for three very unloved people :(
I am hoping Billy gets to help put down that dirtnapper some day.
The other arc continues to build, so many things going on, no wonder you need stickies!
Jason
Well um......
I'm not sure what just happened here in this chapter. Monnie freaked out. A lot. But what happened to cause her to attack Hank? Was she turned into a vampire?
Sad that they all had good chemistry but at least it happened sooner rather than later.
Not Hank!!
Monnie already wasn't one of my favorite characters, (don't ask me why, she just wasn't) but for the love of Pete, NOT HANK!! :o(
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