I wanted to commend you on writing a good story. It's very believable and somewhat familiar to anyone who's had a more conservative partner at some point. I know others here are pushing you to write the verbal equivalent of porn, but there's a place in erotica for a good story about real people. Thank you.
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Anonymous08/19/12
Repetitmort is very correct :) this is a wonderfully written, realistic story. I think this is a good way to get women comfortable with the idea that their ass is sexy and maybe eventually (after feeling the delightful friction) they'll be open to allowing "just the tip in". Get a woman on top, with just the tip after successfully trying this a few times and men should just relax and enjoy whatever she does.
Now when I choose to have anal, I do as the last person said, I'm on top an play with the tip til I relax an go from there... Even though the character didn't get his anal, it was well written an I look forward to more!
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Anonymous11/30/12
awesome story
Assjobbing is my no.2 fav form of sex, even more than actual anal. You perfectly described how hot her ass was and how good it felt to play with
You didn't finish the story. You could have gone a hundred different directions with this. You get a five on the beginning but a two for driving the story of the cliff.
English
Butt nothing
So finish it the butt all the way in.
Loved it!
You should continue this series. I'd love to read about K finally taking it in the butt!
Short and Sweet!
Very nice; good characters you can sympathize with, nicely descriptive action, and just the right length for a morning wank!
No butts
he needs to nail that ass
should have been 5 stars
I screwed up the rating and only rated it 2, meant to give it 5.
Good story
I wanted to commend you on writing a good story. It's very believable and somewhat familiar to anyone who's had a more conservative partner at some point. I know others here are pushing you to write the verbal equivalent of porn, but there's a place in erotica for a good story about real people. Thank you.
Repetitmort is very correct :) this is a wonderfully written, realistic story. I think this is a good way to get women comfortable with the idea that their ass is sexy and maybe eventually (after feeling the delightful friction) they'll be open to allowing "just the tip in". Get a woman on top, with just the tip after successfully trying this a few times and men should just relax and enjoy whatever she does.
Awesome story!!
Now when I choose to have anal, I do as the last person said, I'm on top an play with the tip til I relax an go from there... Even though the character didn't get his anal, it was well written an I look forward to more!
awesome story
Assjobbing is my no.2 fav form of sex, even more than actual anal. You perfectly described how hot her ass was and how good it felt to play with
Hot
I Love Squirting between my Wife's Cheeks!
You didn't finish the story. You could have gone a hundred different directions with this. You get a five on the beginning but a two for driving the story of the cliff.
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