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Absolutely Fuckulous

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by Anonymous

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by Lickideesplit08/16/12

Editor and Experience

The first thing the author's erotic writing needs is real experience with sex involving a human partner! The second thing, after there is something credible to write about, is an editor!

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by Reindeer5808/18/12

English mustn't be your mother tongue

Decent idea, horribly executed. Get an editor or take a few writing lesson. Word usage is atrocious.

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by Anonymous07/02/13

Most of the stories are good but this one wasnt the best one sorry

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