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Only a few of the greatest writers in history could write in second person. I don't know of any but I assume there were. It is extremely difficult because the writer must surrender the omniscient third person that can see into the heart and mind of every character. Writing in the 2nd person, the writer can only know the protagonist and always lapses into revealing thoughts and feelings the writer in 2nd person cannot possibly know. I, for one, would like to read something you wrote in 3rd person past tense and really see what you can do.

I enjoyed this, very much indeed, though I would have liked BOTH girls to have shit uncontrollably!

Hallo cornixregina!

Your yummy scat story "Consequences", is so hot,,, yes! .... I really hope you read my message to the author, I would love to chat with you, I might be able to convince you to start writing again!

Thank you for sharing another of your lovely stories with all of us!

Your kinky scat friend,

Gay Kat.