This was great, Susan. It conveys the true feelings of being alone and the perceived or not uneasieness of the animals around him. Holding my breath for more.
Wonderful story line so far and getting better with every chapter. You nailed it on the head. Men do not like to be alone and are more apt to commit suicide when they lose a loved one or are more likely to get into a relationship after losing someone then a woman is...Very good work as usual Susan
You hit on it - when you lose someone, it's the smell. You lose them bit by bit. But when the smell fades, that's when your mind realizes they are truly gone.
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Oh the suspence
This was great, Susan. It conveys the true feelings of being alone and the perceived or not uneasieness of the animals around him. Holding my breath for more.
Wonderful story line so far and getting better with every chapter. You nailed it on the head. Men do not like to be alone and are more apt to commit suicide when they lose a loved one or are more likely to get into a relationship after losing someone then a woman is...Very good work as usual Susan
Smell....
You hit on it - when you lose someone, it's the smell. You lose them bit by bit. But when the smell fades, that's when your mind realizes they are truly gone.
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