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Great
Really got into this story. except for Momma being a Bitch everything would have worked out.
nothing wrong with a feelgood story
gentle read
Name Confusion
What is it Bev/Beverly or Beth/Elizabeth?
DG Hear
Thank you all for taking the time to comment. One (short) chapter to go. I submitted all the chapters a day at a time but have no control of when they get posted. I do prefer a single submission but this story would have been quite long. Hope everyone stays for the ending.
With respect
DG Hear
ok i fucked up
how did i not read the husband is dead line? i remember the hand holding and squeezing but not the dead line. ok tina is not a cheating slut. it is getting better knowing that. i went back and re-read everything - SO YOU ARE RIGHT, I AM WRONG - SORRY DG.
IS IT POSSIBLE FOR THE WATER TO RUN BACKWARDS
or the sands to reverse. TK U MLJ LV NV
this story looks like a happy ending is coming
to bad he wasted all the years living the single life when he could have had his love except for the bitch mothers interfearence. now i hope he gets his women and lives a happy life from then on.
Delicious dish
I have to admit that it is nice romantic story now. It could have easily taken off for outer space... One thing that struck me was that some people might even get upset about their sex out of wedlock, but I guess that is a memory from sixty years ago. Another detail, I find improbable that fine teen age noses wouldn't have smelled sex in their room, but since that was the whole idea behind putting them in the same room none of the girls are going to comment about it....
now find a nice woman and have your own kids
keep tina to fuck but no way should he have kids with tina till he has kids with another woman...who woule everr raise another mans brats ...fuck the mother yes but find a nice young lady and have a cpl kids of your own first then maybe later you can also move tina in with you and your wife n kids when hers are out of the house
Romantic
You write a very nice true love story, i've enjoyed each chapter.
"nice" story.
Personnally I would like more sexual description,
I like sex too
But not in this story. It's good the way it is.
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