by abbo27
What would make this better is that Mark finds out and turns the tables on both of them.....consequences and revenge would complete this story!
The combination of action and the submissive's point-of-view improves this concept considerably. Keep this up and Chapter 7 should be an award winner.
You have a great start! Would be nice to see this finished.
It has all the elements a wanton slut/whore that is caught like a deer in the headlights.