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Interesting But Far Too Short
Like the title says the story is interesting. However I think and feel that you could have had alot more happen in the first chapter and had a much better cliffhanger than this. Hopefully in the chapters to come there will be more and better cliffhangers.
I'm intrigued
Please continue
Apologies To All Readers
I realise that this is not the best piece of writing I have done. I was a bit over-excited about writing my first story, and tried to bang it out between the hours of 1 and 2 am. There will be more to this, and sincerely apologise for any dissatisfaction, as I realise that it was a below-par story.
Yours sincerely,
TheArcticWolf
continue
im looking forward to read more
question
are you going to make anymore chapters and are you going to have aj n kaitlyn involved in somethin sexual?
Lack Of Content
To those of you who have inquired about any further submissions (all double entendres intended), I have been trying to a couple of months to get Part 2 approved. Unfortunately, despite having been run through a spellcheck numerous times, it is being rejected. I will try to get it out as soon as possible, but I have no idea why it will not be accepted.
Wtf
The fuck man, where's the sex
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