Congrats on your first story. I haven't yet decided if it is my cup of tea or not but will definitely read the next chapter or two before making my decision. It just a very original idea and for that I give you credit and wish you luck.
Ooo, promising. Well written but a bit short. Keep it up!
Very well written and short. Looking forward to reading more. A great set up for a continuing series!
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