All Comments on 'The Lake Monster Ch. 02'

great story keep it going this will be a best seller if you can keep it going awesome and soooooooo freaking hot

not your normal non-human story. I am used to reading about same sex when it comes to weres and vamps but this is completely different from that. I still haven't decided on this one and will give it one more chapter. Regardless if I follow it or not you are off to a great start.

very interesting, MoAR! :)_

Nice, I'm liking it. Not really a traditional mermaid, but who cares? I think this chapter was better written than the first, for reference. Of course, I also preferred the content in this one as well ;)

i loved it. ill admit it cummed during the sex part lol

I love what you did in this chapter. I am a lesbian and never really feel the need for a man, but I have often fantasized how wonderful it would be if a woman could sometimes make love with a cock of her own, as a woman not a man.

Truly a wonderful story!

I've always wanted a woman with a cock to fuck me and pound me senseless while filling me with her cum