Driving Home Sunday Morning

Interesting

self-examination. Thank you.

Incredibly disgusting

Incredibly disgusting subhuman author.

I thought well written

But too short. Embellishment needed, sure one pissed on her, but how many of "them" had cum on her and her hair?

Finally, who was she, by age, and her status ( married, single), and how had this desire developed.

Thanks Don

if she continues down this path

she will self destruck .. heading for a bad ending

interesting

I disagree that we need more detail. It's a vignette, a scene from a life. Why do you need more. So you can hate her & despise her more?

TIGHT

You have a gifted mind. A writer so keenly aware of how people driven to debase themselves think and rationalize is a rare person.

This was a short piece of fiction but enjoyable just the same.

Re: incredibly disgusting

Feels like you read a different story, and felt completed to call the author names. Or maybe you are a name-caller by nature, and that will be your contribution to the world.

I thought it was a sharp insight to a moment in a persons life, on the edge between wanting and fear of wanting. Well done.

Worth A Five Star From Me.....

Succinct, biting, well written story of a drive home. I liked that she was sober this time. Thank you for your efforts, Darkinside!

Not my story. Didn't like it much.

Wrong category!

golden shower makes it fetish! Zero stars.