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How Christi Paid for College Ch. 02

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by Anonymous08/18/12

Short chapters

Your chapters are too short for a novel. Maybe you can consolidate multiple short chapters into longer parts. Otherwise it is stop and go for readers

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by gottschalk0308/18/12

it's not a formal novel, just a multi-part story. I put it in "novels" because once the action gets started I didn't want to keep putting different chapters in different sections of the site. You can always wait until more of it is posted and read ten chapters at a time if you prefer.

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