I am so totally wrapped up by your stories & talent JazCullen that I feel as emotionally mixed up as most of your characters....lol. One minute I'm happy, next sad and almost, hell who am I kidding, it's not been almost I've shed a few tears, then I'm totally sexually amped up and then confused. I just started reading your works this week and I can tell you that I'm hooked! I will be reading everything you've done because I'm sure I'll enjoy them all. I will say, out of this entire saga of stories, Hearts of Warriors is my favorite. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I just read some comments about Kothi being the youngest Volcari (sorry if I misspelled it) and and about the birth order, so I would like to make a slight correction ..... Lacey & Rafe's twins are older then Kothari who is older than Elina. If you remember correctly, Gard & Rayne discovered she was pregnant before Dayton & Freya had even fully mated or it was on the same day they did, either way he is older than Elina - she's the youngest of the Volcari.
Sorry I went back & had to look at it.... lol. So Ben & AJ, then Kothi & finally Elina ... so Elina is the youngest Vârcolac.
Again Jaz, you are awesomely talented and I can't wait for the next chapter. And for those of you out there who are pissing & moaning about all the cliff hangers & the fact that she shouldn't use them so much ..... THIS IS JAZ'S STORY & she will write it how she sees fit to or how her time allows her to. I'm not trying to be an antognistic bitch here, but I feel that it's not fair for anyone to just be down right rude to an author on this site considering you're reading material good enough to be released as a book that you would have to pay for but you are getting to read it for free. Now, not everyone was being rude by saying that so please don't think that I'm telling you that you dont' have a right to your opinons because you most certainly do. I have a problem with people being rude and sarcastic towards someone else when they doing the exact thing they're accusing the other person of - they are accusing her of being selfish basically and they turn around and beg her to post quickly - does anyone else see that or is just me? I understand that not everyone will see things the same way and that's what makes life so interesting because no one wants a "Stepford" society right? You can be honest and constructive criticism is a good thing, but to just be rude because you can be is not cool.
Ok, I feel better now .... lol.
Blessed Be
by
Anonymous09/06/12
Don't make me hurt you...
... for keeping us waiting!! Fabulous story. FABULOUS! I love your ideas, and how you create the arc of your chapters. This is the type of story I'd like to see in print, and I'm sure that, with some REAL editing (minor fixes, e.g. misspellings, changes in syntax, etc.) a publisher would scoop this up! I enjoy the characters immensely, and honestly cannot wait to find out how they grow and fare in the course of the tale. Therefore, PLEASE don't make me have to chase you down and make you hurry with the next chapters! Congratulations...
by
Anonymous09/06/12
Hurry
Jaz baby plz hurry...... im addicted i need more since the 18/08 i was waiting plz post next chpt.
by
Anonymous09/08/12
hurry up!
your teaser for 18 on ur blog was great but post The whole longer version already!
by
Anonymous09/08/12
Owh hurry please, I need to know what's gonna happen to all of them! You're an amazing writer, please hurry, you're killing us!
As I'm still catching up with your story, I don't have to wait for the next chapter :-).
Mind you, There shouldn't be any danger - even in her weakened state Lily should be fast and powerful enough to push off from even a small piece of falling ground with enough force to get back on solid ground, and if her emotional state blocks her survival reflexes, Mac's similarly powerful enough to grab her and either jump them back to solid ground or throw her back relying on his vampire healing to save him. Simple Physics!
However you're a storyteller, not a physicist, and the cliffhanger so far is playing out as though they had mere mortal speed and reflexes. I'm heading straight to the next chapter to find out how you save them!
Thank you for your generosity putting these delicious stories up on Literotica!
by
Anonymous04/13/16
It's 180 not 360
180 is a complete change, 360 would mean he was right back to where he had been in the morning.
Love the story BUT it's "doing a 180" not a 360. It's a metaphor that's rooted in mathematics where the cosine of 0 (aka 360) is 1 while the cosine of 180 is the opposite of 1 ( -1 ). So to" do a 180" means to be on the opposite side of an argument. Okay now that I've gotten that out, LOVE the story!
English
one word
WOW, can't wait for the next chapter
Oh My ......
I am so totally wrapped up by your stories & talent JazCullen that I feel as emotionally mixed up as most of your characters....lol. One minute I'm happy, next sad and almost, hell who am I kidding, it's not been almost I've shed a few tears, then I'm totally sexually amped up and then confused. I just started reading your works this week and I can tell you that I'm hooked! I will be reading everything you've done because I'm sure I'll enjoy them all. I will say, out of this entire saga of stories, Hearts of Warriors is my favorite. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Blessed Be
Who's the youngest of the Volcari .....
I just read some comments about Kothi being the youngest Volcari (sorry if I misspelled it) and and about the birth order, so I would like to make a slight correction ..... Lacey & Rafe's twins are older then Kothari who is older than Elina. If you remember correctly, Gard & Rayne discovered she was pregnant before Dayton & Freya had even fully mated or it was on the same day they did, either way he is older than Elina - she's the youngest of the Volcari.
Blessed Be
Vârcolac ...
Sorry I went back & had to look at it.... lol. So Ben & AJ, then Kothi & finally Elina ... so Elina is the youngest Vârcolac.
Again Jaz, you are awesomely talented and I can't wait for the next chapter. And for those of you out there who are pissing & moaning about all the cliff hangers & the fact that she shouldn't use them so much ..... THIS IS JAZ'S STORY & she will write it how she sees fit to or how her time allows her to. I'm not trying to be an antognistic bitch here, but I feel that it's not fair for anyone to just be down right rude to an author on this site considering you're reading material good enough to be released as a book that you would have to pay for but you are getting to read it for free. Now, not everyone was being rude by saying that so please don't think that I'm telling you that you dont' have a right to your opinons because you most certainly do. I have a problem with people being rude and sarcastic towards someone else when they doing the exact thing they're accusing the other person of - they are accusing her of being selfish basically and they turn around and beg her to post quickly - does anyone else see that or is just me? I understand that not everyone will see things the same way and that's what makes life so interesting because no one wants a "Stepford" society right? You can be honest and constructive criticism is a good thing, but to just be rude because you can be is not cool.
Ok, I feel better now .... lol.
Blessed Be
Don't make me hurt you...
... for keeping us waiting!! Fabulous story. FABULOUS! I love your ideas, and how you create the arc of your chapters. This is the type of story I'd like to see in print, and I'm sure that, with some REAL editing (minor fixes, e.g. misspellings, changes in syntax, etc.) a publisher would scoop this up! I enjoy the characters immensely, and honestly cannot wait to find out how they grow and fare in the course of the tale. Therefore, PLEASE don't make me have to chase you down and make you hurry with the next chapters! Congratulations...
Hurry
Jaz baby plz hurry...... im addicted i need more since the 18/08 i was waiting plz post next chpt.
hurry up!
your teaser for 18 on ur blog was great but post The whole longer version already!
Owh hurry please, I need to know what's gonna happen to all of them! You're an amazing writer, please hurry, you're killing us!
Can't wait for the next chapter in this story.Its fantastic so far.
What!!!!!! Heck no.....please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cliff-hanger? Really?!
I mean characters literally hanging-off-a-cliff-at-the-end-of-the-chapter sort of cliff-hanger....Followed by another long wait no doubt.
*Sigh
O.M.G.
really ....a CLIFF HANGER?! GGGGgggrrrrr...cant wait for next months installment.
keep writing i love your wolf/vampire stories!!!
I hate you.
A lot. That wascbrutally done.
No!!!
Why!? I'm mad at you now Jaz. Lucky for me the next chapter is there so you can save this disaster you through out there.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
LILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hate cliffhangers!! Pardon the pun.. not intentional geez Jaz!!!!
WHAT THE HELL????????????????
OMG!!!
She cant die, but still!
I was hoping Elina would be his mate...damn it!
JSYK...
Turning 360 degrees is a complete circle. For Mac to change completely, he would have turned 180. Just sayin'...
Spectacular!
Great writing as usual.
As I'm still catching up with your story, I don't have to wait for the next chapter :-).
Mind you, There shouldn't be any danger - even in her weakened state Lily should be fast and powerful enough to push off from even a small piece of falling ground with enough force to get back on solid ground, and if her emotional state blocks her survival reflexes, Mac's similarly powerful enough to grab her and either jump them back to solid ground or throw her back relying on his vampire healing to save him. Simple Physics!
However you're a storyteller, not a physicist, and the cliffhanger so far is playing out as though they had mere mortal speed and reflexes. I'm heading straight to the next chapter to find out how you save them!
Thank you for your generosity putting these delicious stories up on Literotica!
It's 180 not 360
180 is a complete change, 360 would mean he was right back to where he had been in the morning.
Minor pet peeves 180 vs 360
Love the story BUT it's "doing a 180" not a 360. It's a metaphor that's rooted in mathematics where the cosine of 0 (aka 360) is 1 while the cosine of 180 is the opposite of 1 ( -1 ). So to" do a 180" means to be on the opposite side of an argument. Okay now that I've gotten that out, LOVE the story!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Hearts of Warriors Ch. 17 or
More submissions by JazCullen.