Your killing me here woman I mean you go and literally give us a cliff hanger! I cant wait for the next chapter I am hanging onto your coat tails and every word but your really killin me over here!
JAZ!!! come on! That was NOT nice at all... seriously. That's the worst cliff hanger yet... pun not intended... :P *sigh* you know I love you though... #hugs
It is good to see more of Kothi and see what has made him who he is.. so good!
Jaz you are so evil to leave it like this!!!
But i do understand.. i will be on pins and needles until the next chapter comes out!!!
Keep up the excellent work.
Donna
Kothari and Dara ^3^
Poor Kothi though...
How come she doesn't know that Kothi is her mate?
This is the Varcolac x Varcolac pairing I am waiting for.
Well. Mackenzie won't survive if she and baby don't. It happened once and you are not that cruel to make him suffer again. Hihi. Love the cliffhanger. Lol.
Thanks for this chappy. I need more Kothi x Dara, Kal x ?, oh, Demetri! Lol. He needs a cameo. Ahaha. So Karn and Ellie would meet again? XD Ah, I need another chappy lolol
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Anonymous08/18/12
Well..
What more can be said so I'll just say read the other comments below completely agree with them
Evil pure evil, now Ill be checking every minute of every day to see if there is a new chapter up.
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Anonymous08/18/12
Umm....
Did you mean to say a 180? Cuz a 360 is a complete circle back to the original point vs a 180 which is an about face.......
(still can't wait for the next chapter!)
~hz
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Anonymous08/18/12
Oh Jaz
You are a truly sadistic author...and we your readers masochists because we will be back for more.
Finally some insight on Kothi...so he's not as cold/arrogant as he presents himself. Nice to know its a carefully constructed wall of defense.
Hurry w/ next ch...we need our next round of "punishment".
Not literally but that's just pure evil. I mean it's just wrong to do that. She better catch a limb or a rock or something cause I will be incomplete if they don't have a baby.
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Anonymous08/18/12
Why ... !!!
I have never hated and loved a story so much!! Please don't make us wait and don't let her die!!
Love the chapter, but wondering how they could mate. They are two different animals. I mean, I know it can be done, but what kind of kids would Dara and Kothari have?
Jaz you know I love you, you're talented. But damn lady! Not even Satan himself would leave readers hanging here. That's not a damn cliff hanger! You left us all stranded on Everest in our underwear! Someone needs to get ahold of Lit control and see about installing that 6th star. Any hackers out there that know how to break into mikothebaby's computer for the next chapter?
That is so mean!! I hope you are furiously writing the next chapter already! Love it! She wont die as she is too strong and the baby will be fine as well!
how could you stop there it is beyond evil please post the next chapter as soon as you can.
great chapter loved it
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Anonymous08/18/12
omg
You Jaz are a genius and a killer to keep us all on pins and needles or should i say cliffs edge and rocks. Lord help this psycho Theresa when they all find her. Hope work doesn't keep youfrom writing so we can see the next direction you take us.
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Anonymous08/18/12
YOU WERE RIGHT...
you were right....you are in BIG trouble for leaving your thousands of fans with such an ending. i hope you are furiously finishing the next two chapters and that they will be posted within the week to make up for such cruelty :P
on a side note, i wholeheartedly agree with bonams, 6 stars at the very least and someone must know a good hacker ;) keep them coming jaz!!!
this is your meanest cliffhanger yet. I know you won't kill off Lily at least you better not, but what of the baby. Now that Mac feels he can better protect a child and Lily was willing to give up her mate for the sake of their child. A mate she spent years stalking for lack of a better word. To now take their child away would be beyond cruel. And what of Kothari and Cassi? They seem to be attracted to one another. Will Cassi be able to save Kothari from the beast w/in him? And now that they know about Theressa will they be able to find her? And what of her attraction to Pietro?
See what you do to me!!!! Now my brain will be trying to figure out what you will do next as I await the next chapter. You are such a tease.....hehe-he
Nope i didnt appreciate that ending at all Ms.JazzCullen so you better update pronto..
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Anonymous08/18/12
DAMN!!!
Type fast!!!!!
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Anonymous08/18/12
oh my god
That was the most exciting one yet. I too have so many questions about the characters but can only ask the main one. What the f... just happened? That was so mean to leave me hanging like that. Please oh please finish the rear of this story soon. I Yves been reading this series from the very beginning and it just keeps getting better. I love this series so much so please of you can find it in your heart to continue this current part I would graetly appreciate it. I also missed u a lot.
Did someone task you to write a literal definition of the word "cliffhanger"? And you don't even have the chapter 18 teaser up!
Loving this story so please post the next chapter quickly!!!!!!
BTW - love the development between Kothi and Dara... hurry and finish this story so you can start the next one ;-).
Kothi is one of my favorite Varcolac. He is the youngest varcolac, but also the most powerful. When he said "The world will swim in blood", I have a strong feeling that he has the power to make that happen and Dara is the only one that can control him. Your cliff hanger was soooooooo cruel. I yelled when I saw that there were no more pages to flip through. Thanks for another amazing read!!!!
But I loved it just the same please hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry!!!!!!!!!!!! Your stories are the only ones I have every given 5 stars keep up the great work.
A cliff hanger, now we get to wait for ages for the next installment. Sigh! I get so bored with constant cliff hangers, like we need it to keep us coming back, when the story itself does that without the need for a cliff hanger!!!
Great ch btw.
That was just evil. I actually feel sick after that ending... *sigh*
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Anonymous08/19/12
-.-
BAH NO ONE likes cliffhangers. With this many chapters and stories there is little to no reason to use them, especially with the short updates coming. Will keep checking for new ones but man its no fun waiting.
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Anonymous08/19/12
You Devil Woman!
O__O
Don't let her die Jazz! D:
I would love to hear more about Pietro and Kothi.
Thanks for updating us on your awesome story.
I just miss the old days when your chapters used to be longer.
Cheers
I have to agree with some of my fellow readers on this....all the cliff hangers are just unnecessary and a bit cruel if only because you don't post updates as often as I know most of us would like. You are such an amazing writer that frankly and your stories are so engaging that you certainly don't need a cliff hanger to insure that your readers are going to return. I'd think that by now ypu could feel confident that as long as you keep writing we'll keep reading!!!
I am really intrigued about what is happening to Kothari. It sounds just horrific not to mention terrifying. I can't imagine how his parents haven't realized that he has this problem or that it's escaped the notice of Rafe, Caleb, and especially Annie. I do feel a bit pleased with myself that I was right about who Kothi's "Angel" is. I suspected his treatment of Dara was the equivalent of a little boy pulling the hair of the hair of the little girl he likes. What has me a bit confused is thar he knows Dara is his mate, but somehow she hasn't felt the mating pull. How can that be? I thought the that was pretty much the strongest instinct for both Were's and Vampires. It seems odd that Dara wouldn't be aware of it. I felt awful for Kothi when he thought about watching Dara with other men. I hope he finds a way to confide in someone, so he can learn to control whatever is happening to him.
As for the Lily thing, all I'm going to say is COME BACK SOON!!!!!!
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Anonymous08/19/12
well
As long as your next chapter is a quick follow up I'm ok with this. I find it slightly annoying you use an actual cliff in your cliff hanger
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Anonymous08/19/12
Please Please Please
Post your next chapters soon. I can't wait for Lily and Mac to connect so we can move on to Kothi and Dara!!! Awesome Stories!
Ironic about the literal lift hanger.... But please don't make us wait too long, I know it's hard with your job and stuff. Just don't let it be another opulent of months if you can help it
English
Really??!!
Your killing me here woman I mean you go and literally give us a cliff hanger! I cant wait for the next chapter I am hanging onto your coat tails and every word but your really killin me over here!
@#*@*!$#*(%!*!#$%!$()!#&
JAZ!!! come on! That was NOT nice at all... seriously. That's the worst cliff hanger yet... pun not intended... :P *sigh* you know I love you though... #hugs
It is good to see more of Kothi and see what has made him who he is.. so good!
OMG!!!
You are correct, I hate you!!! Lol.
What a cliffhanger! Hurry please and write fast.
what the hell....
you really left us with a cliff.......hanger!! I was happy....now I'm crying! I can't wait for more. You're killing me!!
Dear Anon......
Really REALLY bad pun. NO SOUP FOR YOU!!
Wow!!!
Talk about leaving us hanging!!! That is cruel and unusual punishment! 5 stars
Arrrgghhh!!!!!
Jaz you are so evil to leave it like this!!!
But i do understand.. i will be on pins and needles until the next chapter comes out!!!
Keep up the excellent work.
Donna
Mean mean mean mean mean
I hope you're happy now with an ending like that.
I also hope we don't have too long to wait for the next installment
Kothari and Dara ^3^
Poor Kothi though...
How come she doesn't know that Kothi is her mate?
This is the Varcolac x Varcolac pairing I am waiting for.
Well. Mackenzie won't survive if she and baby don't. It happened once and you are not that cruel to make him suffer again. Hihi. Love the cliffhanger. Lol.
Thanks for this chappy. I need more Kothi x Dara, Kal x ?, oh, Demetri! Lol. He needs a cameo. Ahaha. So Karn and Ellie would meet again? XD Ah, I need another chappy lolol
Well..
What more can be said so I'll just say read the other comments below completely agree with them
Evil pure evil, now Ill be checking every minute of every day to see if there is a new chapter up.
Umm....
Did you mean to say a 180? Cuz a 360 is a complete circle back to the original point vs a 180 which is an about face.......
(still can't wait for the next chapter!)
~hz
Oh Jaz
You are a truly sadistic author...and we your readers masochists because we will be back for more.
Finally some insight on Kothi...so he's not as cold/arrogant as he presents himself. Nice to know its a carefully constructed wall of defense.
Hurry w/ next ch...we need our next round of "punishment".
~LadySilverNova~
I hate you.
Not literally but that's just pure evil. I mean it's just wrong to do that. She better catch a limb or a rock or something cause I will be incomplete if they don't have a baby.
Why ... !!!
I have never hated and loved a story so much!! Please don't make us wait and don't let her die!!
I hate you too!!!!
May your panties shrink three sizes with you in them!!!!
Just joking but man what an evil place to end the chapter.
A wolf and a panther
Love the chapter, but wondering how they could mate. They are two different animals. I mean, I know it can be done, but what kind of kids would Dara and Kothari have?
I think I found out where pure evil resides
Jaz you know I love you, you're talented. But damn lady! Not even Satan himself would leave readers hanging here. That's not a damn cliff hanger! You left us all stranded on Everest in our underwear! Someone needs to get ahold of Lit control and see about installing that 6th star. Any hackers out there that know how to break into mikothebaby's computer for the next chapter?
That is so mean!! I hope you are furiously writing the next chapter already! Love it! She wont die as she is too strong and the baby will be fine as well!
Jaz
how could you stop there it is beyond evil please post the next chapter as soon as you can.
great chapter loved it
omg
You Jaz are a genius and a killer to keep us all on pins and needles or should i say cliffs edge and rocks. Lord help this psycho Theresa when they all find her. Hope work doesn't keep youfrom writing so we can see the next direction you take us.
YOU WERE RIGHT...
you were right....you are in BIG trouble for leaving your thousands of fans with such an ending. i hope you are furiously finishing the next two chapters and that they will be posted within the week to make up for such cruelty :P
on a side note, i wholeheartedly agree with bonams, 6 stars at the very least and someone must know a good hacker ;) keep them coming jaz!!!
Oh Jaz
this is your meanest cliffhanger yet. I know you won't kill off Lily at least you better not, but what of the baby. Now that Mac feels he can better protect a child and Lily was willing to give up her mate for the sake of their child. A mate she spent years stalking for lack of a better word. To now take their child away would be beyond cruel. And what of Kothari and Cassi? They seem to be attracted to one another. Will Cassi be able to save Kothari from the beast w/in him? And now that they know about Theressa will they be able to find her? And what of her attraction to Pietro?
See what you do to me!!!! Now my brain will be trying to figure out what you will do next as I await the next chapter. You are such a tease.....hehe-he
HOW DARE YOU!!! D:
You better write fast! >;o
*****
Nope i didnt appreciate that ending at all Ms.JazzCullen so you better update pronto..
DAMN!!!
Type fast!!!!!
oh my god
That was the most exciting one yet. I too have so many questions about the characters but can only ask the main one. What the f... just happened? That was so mean to leave me hanging like that. Please oh please finish the rear of this story soon. I Yves been reading this series from the very beginning and it just keeps getting better. I love this series so much so please of you can find it in your heart to continue this current part I would graetly appreciate it. I also missed u a lot.
U rock!
I totally love this and all your stories.
OOOOOOOOOOOH!
You suck! :)
DUN DUN DUN
You actually had to put them on a cliff for your cliff hanger. Your so bad. You better not make us wait to long or else....
@#$%^&*
The least you could of done was change your teaser so I could see what was going on.
Thanks for the entertainment Mike from Texas.
Oooooo ur in trouble dear!
Jazzy u got some splaining to do! It was insanely good but but why?
WTH?
Did someone task you to write a literal definition of the word "cliffhanger"? And you don't even have the chapter 18 teaser up!
Loving this story so please post the next chapter quickly!!!!!!
BTW - love the development between Kothi and Dara... hurry and finish this story so you can start the next one ;-).
OMGOSH!!!
Kothi is one of my favorite Varcolac. He is the youngest varcolac, but also the most powerful. When he said "The world will swim in blood", I have a strong feeling that he has the power to make that happen and Dara is the only one that can control him. Your cliff hanger was soooooooo cruel. I yelled when I saw that there were no more pages to flip through. Thanks for another amazing read!!!!
That really was mean
But I loved it just the same please hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry!!!!!!!!!!!! Your stories are the only ones I have every given 5 stars keep up the great work.
Bitch
Omg I hate u for doing this to me. Stop cliff hanging me damn it. Oh I love it. You like a man who pulls out before I cum. Please hurry
U are mean
u better not make us wait too long for the next one.............ppl are sitting on the edge of their seats now
omg!
what a horrible way to end that chapter.. a cliff hanger, literally!
harsh :P
write faster :P
OMG!!! Leave us literally hanging in mid-air!?!?!?!?! Wonderful chapter!!
Love getting to know Kothi and Dara more! :o)
OMG
So mean jazz ,"why" the cliff hanger ,but i love this chapter especially the parts with kothi and his angle being a varcolac yahhhhh.
ps :keep up the good work.
Surprise,surprise..
A cliff hanger, now we get to wait for ages for the next installment. Sigh! I get so bored with constant cliff hangers, like we need it to keep us coming back, when the story itself does that without the need for a cliff hanger!!!
Great ch btw.
Groan
That was just cruel! As if any of us are ever going to get bored with your stories and quit reading them! Enough already!
aaaaarrrrggggggghhhhhhh
That was just evil. I actually feel sick after that ending... *sigh*
-.-
BAH NO ONE likes cliffhangers. With this many chapters and stories there is little to no reason to use them, especially with the short updates coming. Will keep checking for new ones but man its no fun waiting.
You Devil Woman!
O__O
Don't let her die Jazz! D:
I would love to hear more about Pietro and Kothi.
Thanks for updating us on your awesome story.
I just miss the old days when your chapters used to be longer.
Cheers
Oh come on!!!!!
I have to agree with some of my fellow readers on this....all the cliff hangers are just unnecessary and a bit cruel if only because you don't post updates as often as I know most of us would like. You are such an amazing writer that frankly and your stories are so engaging that you certainly don't need a cliff hanger to insure that your readers are going to return. I'd think that by now ypu could feel confident that as long as you keep writing we'll keep reading!!!
I am really intrigued about what is happening to Kothari. It sounds just horrific not to mention terrifying. I can't imagine how his parents haven't realized that he has this problem or that it's escaped the notice of Rafe, Caleb, and especially Annie. I do feel a bit pleased with myself that I was right about who Kothi's "Angel" is. I suspected his treatment of Dara was the equivalent of a little boy pulling the hair of the hair of the little girl he likes. What has me a bit confused is thar he knows Dara is his mate, but somehow she hasn't felt the mating pull. How can that be? I thought the that was pretty much the strongest instinct for both Were's and Vampires. It seems odd that Dara wouldn't be aware of it. I felt awful for Kothi when he thought about watching Dara with other men. I hope he finds a way to confide in someone, so he can learn to control whatever is happening to him.
As for the Lily thing, all I'm going to say is COME BACK SOON!!!!!!
well
As long as your next chapter is a quick follow up I'm ok with this. I find it slightly annoying you use an actual cliff in your cliff hanger
Please Please Please
Post your next chapters soon. I can't wait for Lily and Mac to connect so we can move on to Kothi and Dara!!! Awesome Stories!
:(
Ironic about the literal lift hanger.... But please don't make us wait too long, I know it's hard with your job and stuff. Just don't let it be another opulent of months if you can help it
To Ireadtorelax
In answer to your wolf panther mix they would be wanpire, panwire or a wolpanthire what ever they are it will be unique. Hehehehe!!!
Ooh....I can't believe you left it like that.
Thanks for the warning, though! Without it, there might have been some cursing.
As always, looking forward to more!
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