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JonTaylorJonTaylorover 11 years ago
Reminds Me

Of my boyhood fantansies. Insecure, pimply, clumsy boy needs some sort of edge to get the girls interested. Walla! Mind Control.

mattswifemattswifeover 11 years ago
This category is not usually my favorite, but I like this storyline

I hope you keep the softness between the two of them and don't turn it into the usual mindcontrol gig where it's all about degradation, etc. It would be a shame because this is really a nice difference from the usual. Originality is always appreciated. 5*

mitthrawnuruodomitthrawnuruodoover 11 years ago

Really enjoying this little series. I love that it's consensual? mind control. It's a nice wrinkle, and it doesn't make me feel sad that I enjoy it. I hope you do a few more installments.

HypnoFetishGuyHypnoFetishGuyover 2 years ago

I can see that this is an intellectual exercise for you and that you've never actually captured someone. However, high marks for a. First go.

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I'm a computer programmer with a long-time interest in role-playing games and fantasy writing. You can't get much more fantastic than erotica, but I like to mix that with a fantastic element as well.

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