All Comments on 'Just Let It Happen'

Nice little brother looses cherry to sister story

I have enjoyed every one of your stories so far. This one is no exception. The fact that you saw your Sister being fucked by somebody else first just adds an extra "taboo thrill" to it, and besides, fucking a girl straight after somebody else has it's benefits, the girl is already wound up, no foreplay required, her pussy is lovely and wet, it's wonderful. Great storyline, specially the fact that you lose your cherry and you're the first guy to ever cum inside her. Yum yum, wish I could be in that situation to do the lick out ;) Ian xxx

Another great one of yours, though I liked this one in particular. Keep at it though, Id love to read more of your stories.

nice

Is that even possible? Still a hot story.

what the fuck kind of sick stories are you writting no guy is going to join his sister with another guy that is so gay and the way the other guy just kept fucking her when he barged in was totaly unrealistic and she never yelled or anything total bullshit try to keep your stories believable or put them in the fantasy section

I liked it

There is some truth to what "wtf" has already stated in his comment, even though it was crudely worded. The offer is plausible, but a virgin brother would have declined. Ego. And to admit that he was a virgin while another guy is listening will never happen. Yes, agree with wtf on this; pretty gay. Had he exited the room, the sister would have come to his room later, determined the reason for his refusal then sweetly and privately let him have his first experience. With that now behind them, there will be no need for future visits from the skinny, pimply kid from down the block as brother now will set out on a quest for knowledge. Not a bad story but a bit more thought on the plot would have garnered the coveted 100. Marc

Marc he didn't admit he was a virgin until after the guy had left the room. The guy immediately got dressed and left the room right after he was done having sex with her. It was a good story but wtf is right that i don't think the other guy would've stayed in her once he found out that her brother was watching.

Such diversity! One guy can't imagine having brother-sister sex (and others seem to agree)! while another group is so nutso over this author that they cream their pants and scream for more! What brother wouldn't love having a sister break him in like that? Well written and oh so erotic.

I've fucked my girlfriend with other people in the room. It's no biggie really. Though it's funnier when they don't expect it and just walk in!

Five orgasms may be stretching credulity a bit, but it was still an enjoyable read. Pay no attention to the would be detractors, since they may not recognize a good incest tale when they see it.

dont lissen to the other retards, it was a good read thnx

no virgin would have stayed when he saw her getting fucked by someone else he would have turned and left the room if not the house and would have avoided and ignored her please keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic and believable i would have expected this from a woman since she would not know how a virgin guy would react but for a guy to write this is unbelievable pure fantacy and belongs in that area

Well it made me cum weather it was realistic or not

Too rushed and just... meh.

C O N T I N U E O R E L S E

omg this was so hot.

this one definitely needs a continuation

or just for the 1st time virgin. TK U MLJ LV NV

I love this story. Continue? 

He sure came a lot. I was expecting the sister to suck him off while still getting fucked by the other guy.

This virgin character could have been very experienced with how sex works (we have Internet,people)Also,your still a virgin even if someone has seen you nude (his not being shy could have came from compliments in picture messages or something like that).Think.Think.Think.The generations of today and tomorrow are going to be 14 and pregnant drug heads.Ha.The Internet is evil and corrupts ALL young minds!! BEWARE!!!

To the "to everyone" post. Your post makes no sense whatsoever, did you even read it before you submitted it? Quit reading and posting while you're doing drugs, lol. ...and quit reading in the incest section if you don't like this stuff, yeesh.

Story was decent. I wouldn't have stayed and watched either first time around, certainly wouldnt have wanted to fuck my sister right after some other guy had just finished fucking her either. I agree with a previous poster, would be a better build with sister coming to him later to talk and work up from there. I've had sex with others in the same room myself but the story needs a twist since its family ;)

I dont think the guy would have stopped like some think, I wouldn't have, in that situation you either lose your erection or it turns you on and you fuck harder! Heh.

I loved fking my sister,and u also nutted deep inside her..we were drunk and it only happened once

would love to read more of what happens between this brother/sister

You clearly wrote the guy shot deep inside her and later she never let anyone cum in her? Which is it?

who are you calling slow if you had read the story instead of skimming for a something to bitch about you would have read that the guy the sister was fucking had a condom on so he didn't cum inside her but he shot off while deep inside her

Get real, the dudes a virgin, his prostate would be so sore he couldn't stand up straight. Cumming right away, after he just stuck it in I can believe. None of that other stuff, though.

How old was she then lol

I did have a sister that I fooled around with but man did I have to work for it, this one was easy and evey brother should have one.

Hi my names Brian, and I banging all my sisters regularly all the time, and sometimes my mother. But one at a time thow and only when there on birth control as my village doesn’t believe in marriage it does have a thing called breeding partners.

BUT, IT WENT SOOOOOOO FAST.

GIVE US MORE MAKE IT A GOOD

STORY.

It was great until the end. Author just stopped writing. 2 🌟 stars.

Bill S.

Loved this one one, too!

Another story that follows the same pattern as a lot of your submissions (if not all of them).

(1) Rushed through too quickly.

(2) Single page and too short.

(3) Cut off style ending that leaves too many unanswered questions.

There's no doubt that you have a good imagination and decent writing talents. But you're not applying yourself and doing the difficult work of fleshing out the details. 3/5