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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THIS COULD BE A TRIBUTE TO

the Indians of old America, TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Things lost...

...and best forgotten? A very touching poem!

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
To quote Harry Hill, Chosen Mate, chapter 8, War Council:

He looked at the jug beside him and thirsted for a drink of the long consumed days of his younger years.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
very interesting

word choice in the last line

extremely subtle contrast

you are thinking here

5ed gladly

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
textbook case

of when to break out of simple words

kudos

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
further

commentary

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=825346&page=2

here

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