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Winter stream

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by tazz31708/19/12

THE FLOWING STREAM OF WINTERS

lets the sun thaw the essence, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh908/20/12

Snow melts to water ....water

Evaporates to vapour , clouds form vide condensation
It begins to rain
Winter returns
The stream freezeth again ...!!

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by demure10108/20/12

Beautiful.

Even when life is invisible, it's still there.

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by twelveoone04/04/13

nice!

will sting the skin sifting into ever shifting drifts.
5ed

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