All Comments on 'Alien Surrender'

That was, um, interesting. And um just wow, good work, I was out on a limb reading this, not my forte of stories, but good job, very enjoyable, excellent

It was nice but you need more of a detail to both charecters plus i realy wana know what happenes to the poor dude

Rape/Reluctance really isn't my cup of tea, but I'm fascinated by the alien race you've created. Would be interesting to see more of this world.

the build up was not even there ,excuse me wait a minute wait wait a fucking minute how is he not putting up more resistance i mean octodick leads to alien baby wheres the love

needs women its very hard to find stories about alien women and i thought this was it...sadly it was not,i like the green skin,short fangs,6 fingered claws,and the eyes it would have been more sexy if it had a pussy bro

Seems the story needs more, of almost everything. What is Brelan and more about the Brelans themselves. What was the human male doing when he got caught? The penetration description was very confusing anatomically speaking. How did the bump things get beyong large intestine? Will there be more or is this a 1 page teaser?

Please keep going with the story

Please make a part two

Please make a series of this story!!!!

Please continue this story. You can't leave us hanging like that ;-)

Please...

This was a great story... please continue the story!

sometimes a story takes the reader into it and holds you there....this story did that for me. absolute pleasure reading it...

I liked the surrender part...sure about the "cub" to come ..yikes...