True Tale of the Beginning

ready for more

wow, i loved the way you caught the mental process they went through and laid it out through their dialogue.

Amazingly hot

U've caught the feelings really well. Hot and well paced. Waitin for the next one. Put a germ of an idea in my head too. My wife's gonna luv it.

I know the tenor of this story

this matches our marriage and love sex

wow...hot hot. hot. gradual build up of tension giving way to submission

I am in a public train and story almost made me come in my pants. Can't wait to hear the next chapter!

imagine

bragging about this being true what a loser.

The stories I write are fiction.

And I think that's true of the vast majority of contributions to this site, so I'm always wary when someone insists they're offering us a 'true' one.
I've no real way of knowing whether this or isn't but, if it is, can you possibly explain why you feel the need to tell it? I'm neither complaining nor condemning - and the writing's not bad at all - I would just love it if someone could give a genuine rationale for wanting to admit their own inadequacy in such a way.

If you like cuck stories myou will enjoy this one

But if she fucks this big cock man who she thinks is a real man, he has lost her. The pain will come. And he'll live with the shame and humiliation or she'll leave him. Sad for him

I like this and the way you write.

Hot hot hot 5*

Thanks for your feedback

Jeeze, I see alot of silly little errors a little bit of editing would have caught, but the story is told so I guess that is what matters. Responding to the below comments...

- no haven't lost her yet, still married, though not necessarily happily truth be told.
- why is it important to me tell this story, I don't know really, just wanted to put it out there.
- those who have lived this sort of thing will recognize how this is things often start, with a conversation, with trepidation. For most of us, the idea of wanting two girls at the same time was something we all sort of happily pursued, hoping our girls would get drunk with a girlfriend or whatever. But the idea of sharing our girl was, to quote the guy in the princess bride, inconceivable. It was for me anyway. So strange to me to have lived this life. This talk lasted for quite a while before anything happened.

It is a release.

I write a bit now, the vast majority are "How to" articles and I make a few bucks. For fun I dabble in relationships, romance, sometimes mildly naughty and yes, a few of those sold also over the years.

I try to read most of the stories here and on other sites, the why for me is to try and understand human nature. Only a very very few do I find titilating.

The first line of this story got my attention, and the comment from Mitchfren wondering why? Why would someone write about something they find shameful? Well, most stories I write have bits and pieces of truth also, and I have posted a few mostly true ones here which no one ever believes. I suspect most others do the same.

The answer to the question of why write it all down is clear to me. It is a release, and that can be pain, pleasure, anger, and even lust and more. Even the comments, both pro and con are a release, some choosing to post anonymous even when the ID is anonymous?

So much anger in those comments. Cheating mates, betrayals, this endless list kept bottled up brings pain.

Yes, a release. Just like the culmination of a sexual act, there is a moment of satisfaction in telling the story.

Letting it out in words helped to partially heal me, I know that.

Don't Worry About the Real Losers Who Post Negative Comments

There are some guys on here that feel the need to "read" stories they know ahead of time they won't like, and then post negative feedback just to fuck with you. Ignore them. I'm not sure what their motivation is, but you can clearly tell by the title, the subtitle, and the intro paragraphs where these stories are going. Yet they persist in reviewing them in a negative light because of the whole thrust of the story, not on the story itself. It's like they are punishing themselves - maybe, if I may speculate - because they were insecure of their own love or lovelife or body or something - and actually lost their women to someone with more sexual prowess. And now they are haters.
Frankly, I put the "read" (above) in quotations, because they don't really read what you've written at all, they just see where it's going, and go to the end to post their crap.
They are the true losers. And I think it's because they lost - their wives or girlfriends - because more important than the sex is the relationship.
I also have shared my wife. To a guy with a way bigger cock. It's awesome to watch, to experience, to join in or just be there for her later.
We've been together 37 years - and that ain't gonna change.
For those who can't handle it - move along - quit "reading" things you don't understand and/or can't handle and then abusing the writer. Get a life.

great story

I look forward to more of this story as it emotionally charged and the wife has the struggle within her mind that she doesn't want to cheat while married because she doesn't want other to know. Hope to learn how it turns out. Thanks for writing and sharing.

thank you

great start, and look forward to much more.

This could have been better, could have been worse .

This story started off decently with the acknowledgement of the differences the two halves of the respective , pre-debauched couple . I also respected how the author notated the gulf between the two due to his physical qualitied combined with carnal bumbling & fumbling .

I still don't see the friendship that served as a launchpad for this relationship. the wife is apparently quite beautiful but so far seems to bring NOTHING else to the table. She doesn't seem ' worth it ' in terms of a man humbling himself or even marrying her. Also, what issues are in the husband's past that have conditioned him to what's coming?

So far- she takes & he gives. He is hurt by her borderline brutal evaluations but never thinks of leaving her . Why? What exactly is it in his past that makes him such a sub ? What did she see in him in the first placeI to tolerate his pump & dump median in the bedroom.? These questions could be applied to any cuck story but I ask them now because this author has potential.

The office stud is going to take his woman. That's a inevitability but I hope the author goes for a mire err more complete picture before that happens. Cuck stories are never easy to read but good writing is good writing. Xie Glover & Mr. Stan give understanding if not acceptance as to to how ho' events unfolded.

This author is rushing things & I hope he can step back & add some humor, insight along to go with deph ( pun intended ) . Otherwise this story could be entitled ' An ( In )Complete Story Of The Beginning.

Ture or not willing cuckoldry is a FACT. Cuckqueens are a FACT. They are amongst the most sad and depressed people on this planet. The cuckqueens think only with their crusty cunts and the cuckolds think only with their shriveled up and usless tiny cocks. The 'man' that has been sharing his wife for 37 years has to be one of the most saddest and pathetic and guliable creatures on this planet. After 37 years the cuck still doesn't understand what it has married and that the cuckqueen it married was never satisfied with it and never will be. The cuckqueen it married cares nothing for it and has only been using it as a meal ticket it's what cuckqueens do, it's what ALL cuckqueens do. They fuck anything and anyone and that comes close to them and then fuck over their cuckolded wimp hubby again and again and they convince theu WACC that it is good for the marriage and they still love their tiny pricked cuckboy. This 'story' is just another WACC story and the vote for all such stories true or not is 1 star and will always be so.

Great!

I loved the internal conflict, for I felt the same. I have had the same feeling and its a strange and hot thing. Keep going because I want to know how it went down and if jealousy poped up again.

realistic

Good story. looking for a follow-up.

great start

now let's get on with it.

Responding to the Feedback

Hi All,

First, thanks for the positive feedback and even the attempt to explain the negative feedback, name calling etc.. whatever. I too wonder why people read stories that they know where its going and then complain. Its akin to driving up to a steak house and then screaming bloody murder at the animal cruelty. Hmmm...maybe try another restaurant? Not a precise analogy, but you get the point.

To Lord, as for friendship, I could have done a better job conveying what made me fall for her, but I guess its kindof hard to really explain. Sometimes you click; we used to sit in pubs and play Sherlock Holmes where we'd look at people and try to deduce their occupations, etc... We loved the same movies, books, etc. We actually met in class and argued constantly about our take on the various books we were discovering. The friendship.....guess I didn't want to waste too much time building that out...showing her virtues. They are many...and in truth, she was not a raving beauty, merely a pretty girl with a very long lean body. As to why I stayed with her..I loved her. No other way to say it....I loved her company, I loved her conversation.. Loved the incredible sex when it happened. As I said, I was young and although I didn't know how to give her satisfaction, I had no such problem.

As for the comments about internal conflict, to me that's what it was all about in the beginning. I wasn't kidding when I said I was thinking seriously about taking a swing at the guy. I was definitely a don't look at my girl kind of guy. It really is funny how we change.....and how we struggle to remain essentially ourselves in the face of all the world asks of us.

Again, thanks for the feedback.

Really, try to calm down

The cuck-railing really paints you in a poor light, Mr. Anon. The group is titled "Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more" . It is not titled "Faithful Wives-women who are forced to remain in loveless relationships due to threats of violence". I'm sure you love the attention, and you you feel you have an effect on the world when you vote 1 star. But seriously, if you are not creating and submitting, you are really just writing on the bathroom wall. Insulting people doesn't make you insightful or smarter. If the only stories you like are the ones where the guy gets the revenge you wish had gotten when she hurt you so badly, why punish yourself? The tag lines usually tell which ones those are. Read them, and enjoy them.

Feel free to note the respectful tone and friendly advice offered here, with nary an insult or demeaning comment. See? Its easy.

Author? Thanks for posting. A detailed insight into a semi-failed relationship, although you say you're still together, albeit not completely happy. Looking forward to the rest of your tale, in your words. Well constructed and not too quick. Just one of the many threads in the vast human tapestry. How to fight that thing that lures you, even as you know it is bad for you? Well done.

some real angry people here....strangely angry...

Wow...some of the strangest verbal assaults ive ever read..a nutjob critic who want to control story category placement, classical desire to control others...control yourselffirst my angry friend. A man who launches this much hatred over a story is likely to have lots of issues .sorry for your loss

Disjointed

Not so bad that the reader can not understand what is going on overall, but disjointed enough that it sometimes takes several sentences to realize that some aspect of the flow (time, place, subject matter, etc.) has changed. Hubby breezes past how and when, and especially WHY he and Sweetie got married. It is especially mysterious as to why Sweetie would marry a guy who does not ring her bell!
There is probably a good, perhaps even a great story in here, but this one, as posted, is NOT it!
3*

Continue

Do continue with your story. Sure, there are a few minor editing issues but I find it quite erotic especially given the fact this actually happened.

I understand completely the need to confess or at least share your story to come to terms with everything. So tell your readers every detail, purge yourself of all repressed emotions and hopefully you will reconcile all issues.

A few things are certain to happen as they already are. You'll be getting lots of criticism and advice. What I will offer is this. The significant number of emotional comments (28) to date proves one thing.

An attractive wife fucking someone other than her husband inspires lust and or desire in all of us. The only difference is how each individual sates those emotions and urges.

Should you write it, I'll be reading your tale to see how you satisfied yours.

Damn

A cuck is born. Another one bites the dust.

Please keep going

I loved your story and I hope you continue. Yes there are some editing issues but if you get an editor they are easily sorted out.

Keep it up and ignore the poor weak people who feel compelled to read these stories in a state of total denial of there real desires.

Alan

thank you again for all your feedback

I've enjoyed almost all the comments here; even the ones where people vigorously condemn the subject matter have been interesting to me. I've written the next installment of our little history and it is awaiting approval. I have actually begun corresponding with a few interesting people as a result of this. Good times.

Thanks For Continuing

I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!

Did she every do anything with the co-worker after you talked about it?

not that i know of

she never did anything with him as far as I know...and I really believe that to be the case. She did have a party one time while I was out of town. It went very late and only he and a few others were left by 2am....but she assures me nothing happened.

thank you for your feedback / re mental process

To me, the internal conflict we experience as we engage in taboo activities is compelling.

THIS STORY IS WHAT I COINED "TRUE FICTION"

now if the author can chapter this out to a conclusion, a good story is in progress, TK U MLJ LV NV

Great story

I would like to read the next/final installment. I am assuming that she did fuck this "stud". Did she become pregnant from it? It was more than once, I assume. Are the main characters still married?

She never did That guy

She never did that guy as far as I know.She did eventually do others and even sometimes enjoyed it...lol.

Hot

She goes from being a pal (almost sisterly) to his cumdump in a trice! It goes unstated WHY he would change such an 'unsexual' attitude into one of lust, and even MORE perplexing WHY she would go along with this, especially when he was NOT floating her boat AT ALL!

I cannot understand why he would not have gotten up from the bed, picked up the phone, asked her for The Bull's number, dialed it then handed it to her! (Is there any doubt that she knew his number, despite not yet screwing him?)

5*

Nice Beginning

Just started reading your series and really liked it, I can relate completely to how you felt in the beginning in some ways. Looking forward to reading the rest in the series. Well done!

thanks for the feedback

thanks for the kind words.

just another wimp coward husband

If this story is true, then you are pathetic.

anonymous?

To Anonymous; You left a cowardly comment anonymously. Has your lady stepped out on you? You are angry as hell, but can't quite explain away the boner can you? No doubt you have given yourself the same line in the mirror. Go easy on yourself and consider this: I suspect tanga is getting more from a wider variety of ladies than you can imagine.

Tanga, the story describes a seriously courageous bit of self awareness. Thanks for sharing.

Pathetic? maybe, but erotic certainly

The story is true. Am I pathetic? Generally not, but this side of me have been a source of eroticism and angst for many, many years now. The marriage has been less than perfect....ok, its been a whole lot more of me kissing her ass than I'd have liked, but she's so hot. If you saw her naked you'd understand....

edit

* has been..not have been...

interesting...

it isn't often that a man bares his real life as an erotic tale that will most assuredly have the BTB crowd screaming for his head.
i wish you luck. and a thick skin.

thank you for your comment

I have a fairly thick skin, but really I know that so many men have had a similar experience, transitioning from jealousy to arousal, that I do not pay too much attention to those who reject me for this.

I think the planet would be a better place if people were not so possessory in their approach toward women. As for me, if you read the other accounts, you'll see that we went further down that path than I'd have ever expected. I was, just like most guys, the type of guy who would become enraged if you'd tried to pick up my girlfriend when I was with her. But something changed in me and while those feelings of anger surface at times, for the most part they are gone, replaced by a lust I cant and dont want to be rid of, when a man approaches my wife and ultimately seduces her. Watching her expression as she fights an internal battle against a conservative upbringing and self concept of herself as a "good girl" is something I can never get enough of. Blurred Lines is her favorite song lately.

I guess it is a soso attempt at a cuck story.

Here a Cuck Author, who wants to discuss

@ tangaloungedreaming All right you are a sexual minority man. If you are hetero, that means you are a special porn addict. That is a special porn addiction means you are aroused by fucking your mate by strangers. I am tolerant to the sexual minorities. If you read my comments you can know, what I am curiouse about.
I am curiouse about the next things:
1. Does a cuckold hot wife pair want to bring up children?
2. If it is common thing to want children. Do the cuckold hot wife pair want DNA relative children to the cuckold or the DNA relativity to the husband is not important among them?
3. HOW A CUCKOLD HOT WIFE PAIR WANTS TO BRING UP CHILDREN?
Do they want to bring up their children to sexual majority 18 years old people or they want their sons to be 18 years old cuckold candidates and their daughters to be 18 years old hot wife candidates?

I know a bisex husband hot wife pair with two sons and THE WIFE BROUGHT UP HER SONS TO BE SEXUAL MAJORITY MEN (in Hungary)! However this is only one sample for any statistics!

im a pretty normal guy

I'm a pretty normal guy, believe it or not.

She's still hot looking, but her attitude has gotten much more conservative. I'm still obsessed with seeing her with another man. By the way, I try to respond via email too to those who contact me. Love chatting about her.

Your Stories Are Exciting

I have read 3 or 4 of them now and they do a great job of building the excitement, but my friend, you stop short of delivering! Every time! You need to add a part 2 to this story and some of your others. They get so hot, then just stop! No good.

Sorry man....

I don't seem to have a ton of time to write, but I'll try to add to them.

Email me if you like, I'll fill you in a bit if you are interested.

puzzeled?

i cant understand why so many people on here, start what could be a great story then stops. its no wonder they get bad remarks.

See this ios the type of nasty comment that are not needed

on here. If he didn't like the story why read it? And if he read it and didn't likeit why did be even hang around to finish it? It's his type of comments that are destroying this site. I gave it a 5 to help offset his reply

Not bad at all

The writing here is actually pretty good, some of course will dislike the subject matter.
It is a short study of a fairly common human response to a sexual situation. The results of acting on a fantasy can often be disastrous though.
Reality is best approached with caution.
From the beginning of the internet, there have been those that are negative, the goal seems to be to get a rise out of someone, anyone. It's a bit like Rats in the grain bin, no matter what one does, there always appears to be a few.
It's easy to say that terrible comments like "Go kill yourself" or "Stop writing" has no effect but the truth is, it does affect an author. I know negative comments affect my own writing, to the point where rather than letting the story unfold as I think of it, I find myself wondering what the reactions of readers will be.
Then I find myself deleting what took hours to write, and now I find myself writing less and less. I have horrible postings on some of my own stories, names from "wimp" to "cuckold" yet I am none of those.
Responding to negative anons does little if any good, because the truth is that for some, that is the goal.
I think I know the answer, and that is to delete any negative nonsensical responses, without comment.
But then, I just went and broke that rule, didn't I?
All tales have a beginning, and this is a good start of a touchy subject matter. Keep writing, remember that if just 1% likes your work enough to purchase it, you end up on the New York Times best seller list!
Thanks,
MGM