All Comments on 'The Competition: A Very Short Story'

I think she should bring some of her friends in on the fun

Sometimes sisters just don't know their brothers at all!!! lol

You should continue the story and build up their relationship then slowly bring in some of her girlfriends and maybe a threesome.

I really liked it. I hope you decide to continue. Will his sister end up pregnant?

mmmmmmmmmmm I wish my sister would do this to me, my dick is rock hard

I am eying my brother for quite some time. This story gave me a good way to explore the possibility of fucking my brother, who is handsome and just turned 17.

why only 4 stars?

a very different sort of competition (so I can keep the title)

its like living the past mmmmmm thank god for sisters

That was great. Well done. Are you going to write any more about these two?

Fun story. Thanks for posting it, and writing it, of course.