All Comments on 'Picking the First Fruit'

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Well done. Makes me wonder what kind of men Johnny and Wes turn out to be.

Your stories are always a good read. Imaginative, well written and researched.

Nuff' said.

This is a great story, always enjoy reading your stories as they make me very horny & hard.

Need a good fuck after this one :-)

with care and experience. A really fine job, this. No matter the category, this is top-notch writing and craftsmanship. The dialogue and the characterisation, the relationships and the conflicts all woven with finesse. Wonderful, and an immensely satisfying read. Thank you.

I always like your stories. The plot is always good and they are always well written. Good job and thanks for sharing with us.It was hot too.

Excellent! Loved your other stories and this one is right up there too!