All Comments on 'Kennywood Picnic'

sick fuck is all this author is.

but still, i kinda liked it.

A man who loves wooden roller-coasters is NOT going to wimp out on the Black Widow! (that is NOT the only unrealistic part!). The author provides NO rationale for Sweetie to have been interested in pre-Hubby after the first BJ established his Teeny Weinie status ... Not rich or interesting, the Little Wand is not Magic and clearly, he is not very smart ... So WHY?

The story has a big problem at the finish ... Is Hubby is going to accept that Sweetie resumes her bigcock mega-slut history (or, more likely, CONTINUE with it in their home area - something he had not previously suspected or discovered) OR just drop her off at John's station on HIS way home to meet with his lawyer! Pity he didn't think to snap some pictures at the van (not too smart, remember?)

3*

There should be an area for Gay married stories.

Wow what dickless wonder you are. You deserve every creampie and every humiliation you get. Only fucked up turds like you would get off on this shit. Just another castrated willing cuckold your whore saw you coming when she first met you and she knew that you would be a better meal ticket than anything else around that's all you are to your whore nothing else.

Can you say HIV boys and girls? I understand the whole " different strokes for different folks" idea, but a marriage like this would seem like utter Hell to me for both parties involved. I mean you've got deception, betrayal, and I've already mentioned the STD crap shoot this guy is taking.

I take exception to that last paragraph as well. The details of the story plainly told us that she slept with this man before they married. It should have been obvious that he would not have been able to fulfill her needs. There is no challenge to love here at all. There is no love. There is only a spineless little man married to a whore who could not possibly give a damn about him.

I just don't get why so many fucking writers think this is fucking sexy. Watching your wife get gangbanged is about as sexy as getting your nuts smashed with a hammer. So in the scheme of things it's just another WACC story.

Awful story. Not sexy, not erotic, not anything. Even the Kennywood Park references couldn't save it ( and I've been going to Kennywood Park all my life). Great park, crap story.

plays well into my gangbang fantasies... this girl enjoyed!

this shit is not LW.

Really liked this story. As a theme park enthusiast, this is the first story I have read involving a theme park (and a gangbang to boot) and I hope to find more. Many thanks!

leave her there and she need not get off that ride, and he'd be done with her. honesty here, with himself and her count for something.

BUT BENDING OVER AND BEING A WIMPY CUCK IS OUT OF LINE, tk u mlj lv nv

I hope the marriage isn't doomed.

Kennywood is a tiny park right outside of Pittsburgh where there is no tailgating or even drinking. Kind of a lame pathetic, not really erotic story

Yoi!! Double Yoi!!! Triple Yoi!!! It's kinda like when those bungles beat the stillers by 2 points back in '88... unbelievable!!

Said in my worst Myron Cope (z"l) voice

Cause you are one sick puppy

what was the point of this it was all over the place and with no end result either way. did they split up or did he become a more useless wimp than he already was????

I'm sure as you are that this fool gave it a 1 vote. So I will give it a 5 to offset this asshole of LIT's vote.

Very good fortune for you married life, TK U MLJ LV NV

what a lousey woman..

Just can't take these kind of wimps. If she's so enamored with big cock thugs let her live with them and they pay the bills. No way I could support a slut.

My wife and I went to Kings Island near Cincinnati for her company’s summer picnic. She was dressed in a very light sundress that was basically see through when the light was behind her. All of the guys at her work were flirting with her. I really wanted to ride some of the awesome rides but she didn’t. I would leave to ride a couple then return about every two hours. I noticed her missing a time or two an she came back with one of the guys from her work. I could tell they had been having sex. Her hair was a mess and she was embarrassed to look me in the eye. She said they rode a ride to explain her hair. When I asked her to go on with me then, she claimed it upset her stomach so she was just going to sit and chill. I left to go ride more, but circled back in five minutes. I saw her and two other male coworkers leave and head to the parking lot. I followed. I saw them climb into a minivan in the back. I watched as she disappeared,I guess sucking their dicks. Then I saw her straddle on of them and the van started bouncing. We repeated this cycle three more times, the last one I watched as she got fucked during the nighttime fireworks. She was more worn out than me that day. A short time later I confronted her. She admitted to fucking five guys that day, two of them twice. We had a long discussion and it turns out that I was more turned on than upset. Since then we both have been enjoying sex with others and are so much happier together.

Another fucked up story.

DOL