by ikhneumon
I would expect nothing less from you and I got just that:
absolutely, exquisitely beautiful.
I only require that you make this into a series, preferably with 100 chapters!
What a great story about an established couple, and you do a masterful job of keeping the erotic level high as you weave through the phases of this relationship. The surprises are gentle yet ring so true. I wish I knew these men in person. :D
As you said, short and sweet. It reminds me of ice cream: it doesn't last long, but while it does it's sweet and makes you feel wonderful.
Such a simple and thoughtful story, peaceful even. It makes me want to go to the beach and be in the moment with my loved one.
Not only for the wonderful story but your guys were in my neighborhood.
you write so well, expertly. that makes the story fun to read, but the most wonderful part of this is how you manage to convey the devoted, layered connection between jeremy and eric. i can't put my finger on how you do it ... it's not like you used many chapters or even pages to capture them and their shared history. just a short series of vivid images and tender memories. but somehow, i can just feel how rooted they are in each other. throughout the whole of eric's narration - in all his acute observations and candid revelations and easygoing humor - there's an undercurrent of happy wonder at the love he shares with jer. you threw in a freakin sun god and that love still seems like the greater miracle.
oh yeah, and the sex was hot. really hot. in case you were wondering.
The surfer god of male love attended by dolphins - that's a wonderful summer love concept.
Leaves me both yearning and fulfilled, like all the best stories. Beautifully erotic.
A very sweet and lovely story !
Good luck in the Summer Lovin Contest !!
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for such a lovely story and please keep them coming.