All Comments on 'Blessed by the Sun'

by ikhneumon

Sort by:
  • 18 Comments
LaVieErotiqueLaVieErotiqueover 11 years ago
Oh yeh

I would expect nothing less from you and I got just that:

absolutely, exquisitely beautiful.

I only require that you make this into a series, preferably with 100 chapters!

talismaniatalismaniaover 11 years ago
Lovely!

What a great story about an established couple, and you do a masterful job of keeping the erotic level high as you weave through the phases of this relationship. The surprises are gentle yet ring so true. I wish I knew these men in person. :D

avidreadravidreadrover 11 years ago
Absolutely Lovely Story.

As you said, short and sweet. It reminds me of ice cream: it doesn't last long, but while it does it's sweet and makes you feel wonderful.

EMArnoldEMArnoldover 11 years ago

Such a simple and thoughtful story, peaceful even. It makes me want to go to the beach and be in the moment with my loved one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

cliffgirl08cliffgirl08over 11 years ago
Oh Bravo

Not only for the wonderful story but your guys were in my neighborhood.

GobletHolly182GobletHolly182over 11 years ago
beautiful

you write so well, expertly. that makes the story fun to read, but the most wonderful part of this is how you manage to convey the devoted, layered connection between jeremy and eric. i can't put my finger on how you do it ... it's not like you used many chapters or even pages to capture them and their shared history. just a short series of vivid images and tender memories. but somehow, i can just feel how rooted they are in each other. throughout the whole of eric's narration - in all his acute observations and candid revelations and easygoing humor - there's an undercurrent of happy wonder at the love he shares with jer. you threw in a freakin sun god and that love still seems like the greater miracle.

oh yeah, and the sex was hot. really hot. in case you were wondering.

ChrissiChrissiover 11 years ago
Thank you!

Put a tear in my eye, a happy one.

TimothyMTimothyMover 11 years ago

The surfer god of male love attended by dolphins - that's a wonderful summer love concept.

podgapodgaover 11 years ago

Leaves me both yearning and fulfilled, like all the best stories. Beautifully erotic.

CMfromSwedenCMfromSwedenover 11 years ago

A very sweet and lovely story !

Good luck in the Summer Lovin Contest !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thank you

Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for such a lovely story and please keep them coming.

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 10 years ago
sweet

a wonderfully put together romance. i love your stories.

darthatheosdarthatheosabout 9 years ago
Great

My only complaint is that it wasn't longer.

Reader777Reader777over 8 years ago

What a great story!! Would love to read more about this happy couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sweet, excellent

A well written story about two lucky guys.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous