All Comments on 'A Summer Fling to Remember'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story, needs editing

Probably one of the hottest stories I've read this year. I'd recommend running it by an editor though. There was some missing words and misused words that took away from the overall hotness. I guess poor grammar throws me off even when I'm turned on...

TLMorganTLMorganover 9 years ago
Hot story!

I hope Tracy does return!

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