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loser
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Not at all believable
I find stories a lot more erotic when there is enough character development and motivation to make the story seem "real"
Why
did the author write this pathetic story ? There is absolutely nil character development,
other baisic sex drive there is no motivation for any of the characters, all told this is just a worthless bunch of words and before I forget it has no real ending it just petters out.
Hot story
I like this fantasy too...thanks for writing and sharing.
Liked it
I think it was a good story, short interesting, and fun.
some people
write because have something to say or share why do you write you moron.
Neighbor trade
I would like to go back in time and trade 10 of my 'teen-year' neighbors for these two. Or maybe just one of them (but I get to pick which one!) No, it's not realistic, but it IS a great fantasy! Turns out Sweetie has an agenda of her own! And here I was, thinking she was just altruistic! Practice, practice, practice!
Tomorrow's class will have FMF and anal on the curriculum, with Bukake as homework and Golden Showers as extra credit!
Wrong category
I don't usually say only bad things about a story, but in this case, I will make an exception. Considering that hubby raised Jeff like his own son, because Jeff was fatherless, I think this story is offensive when placed in the LW category, and it really belongs in Incest/Taboo instead. Fathers might have discussions with their sons about sex, but to demonstrate with the wife and involve someone in a threesome who is also a "foster son" is ridiculous. Based on Jeff's ability to fuck, not to mention his staying power, he clearly is not lacking in confidence nor in experience. One star; too bad I can't give a lower score than that.
It's A **
Read.
Unrealistic
The dialogue all sounds the same, Kara needs no convincing, and switches readily admits this was her plan. Feels too false and contrived, but a nice idea. Just weakly presented.
Nobody was that dumb
He played dumb to get laid. Oldest trick in the world.
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