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UAlbanyGirlUAlbanyGirlover 11 years ago
great stories!

this reads more like a "what i did on my summer vacation" essay, but there are a lot of hot scenes contained in here.

you should pick one and flesh it out, providing all the detail of the flirting and teasing that lead up to the fucking!

try writing from the third-person perspective too. it's hotter than "I did this" and "I did that."

there's 4 or 5 good stories packed into this post and I'd love to read them one day.

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I have a very vivid imagination. I like people who are intrinsically smart, but don't make it a big part of how they portray themselves. I used to write stories here but it has been a long time since I've written one. My favorite thing is to help make someone so wet or hard th...