...very much. Do be prepared for some negative commentary from those who feel you have impugned the honor of BDSM by mingling it with adultery. I'll be hoping to read more about these two!
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Anonymous08/25/12
A great story
And how nice it is, just once in a while, to have 'Undress for me' rather than 'Strip!'. I know it's only a little thing, but little things often make a big difference. As to the critics the other Anonymous mentions, please do your best to ignore them - you are a good writer and I would love to read more.
Thank you for posting this marvellous little story - five stars - and more like it, please!
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...very much. Do be prepared for some negative commentary from those who feel you have impugned the honor of BDSM by mingling it with adultery. I'll be hoping to read more about these two!
A great story
And how nice it is, just once in a while, to have 'Undress for me' rather than 'Strip!'. I know it's only a little thing, but little things often make a big difference. As to the critics the other Anonymous mentions, please do your best to ignore them - you are a good writer and I would love to read more.
Thank you for posting this marvellous little story - five stars - and more like it, please!
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