You have good ideas but are going over the top. Write about the real times peeping, jo, panties. You have a lot to offer. You may still achieve your desire in the right circumstance.
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Anonymous08/26/12
Would he impregnate her next ???
Would he impregnate her next ???
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Anonymous09/03/12
make it so
why dont u get her drunk, crawl into her bed and fuck her instead of these degrading fantasies.
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Anonymous11/07/13
Loved It!
Loved the story, but not making your Mom into a slut. I had a sexual relationship with my Mom for over 30 years. I never thought about the language you use. During the sex some words would be spoken, but the respect for who she is must always be there. More description of how she looked would be better. Try to describe the scents, sounds and feel! Was Mom hairy? More stories!
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Anonymous06/28/14
Bad taste
Mothers are to be worshiped, not degraded. I see nothing wrong with a relationship with a mother as long as it is agreeable to both, and each respects the other.
To abuse, or use abusive language, does not a good story make.
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Anonymous02/05/15
Mommies need to be taught by son's
Somebody needs to realize these are just fantasy. The tabooness of degrading ones mother like that is quite a turn on. Mom's want their son's to be Dominant, and aggressive in order to properly breed. Excellent writing!! Pay no mind to critics. They wouldn't know how to properly fuck their mother like she deserves.
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Anonymous03/02/15
Beautiful!
You did right to fuck that fat slut of a mother you have. The next thing you need to do is make her your baby factory. Preg her up man!
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Anonymous05/17/15
Mention of " thin legs "
Mention of " thin legs " of his mother turned me off. I was hoping for nice big muscular legs with cellulite on her hips, sorry. Thin legs on a woman is not my thing.
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Anonymous08/22/16
Ok
I give you five stars, but I don't really feel that way. These three chapters are too violent and insulting. I don't understand how you can treat a woman this way, even in fantasy. And especially your mother.
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Anonymous11/19/16
anon
to the other anonymous it's all about dominance, all women need to know their fucking place, if you don't know what that means that your too young to read this
English
A little too far
You have good ideas but are going over the top. Write about the real times peeping, jo, panties. You have a lot to offer. You may still achieve your desire in the right circumstance.
Would he impregnate her next ???
Would he impregnate her next ???
make it so
why dont u get her drunk, crawl into her bed and fuck her instead of these degrading fantasies.
Loved It!
Loved the story, but not making your Mom into a slut. I had a sexual relationship with my Mom for over 30 years. I never thought about the language you use. During the sex some words would be spoken, but the respect for who she is must always be there. More description of how she looked would be better. Try to describe the scents, sounds and feel! Was Mom hairy? More stories!
Bad taste
Mothers are to be worshiped, not degraded. I see nothing wrong with a relationship with a mother as long as it is agreeable to both, and each respects the other.
To abuse, or use abusive language, does not a good story make.
Mommies need to be taught by son's
Somebody needs to realize these are just fantasy. The tabooness of degrading ones mother like that is quite a turn on. Mom's want their son's to be Dominant, and aggressive in order to properly breed. Excellent writing!! Pay no mind to critics. They wouldn't know how to properly fuck their mother like she deserves.
Beautiful!
You did right to fuck that fat slut of a mother you have. The next thing you need to do is make her your baby factory. Preg her up man!
Mention of " thin legs "
Mention of " thin legs " of his mother turned me off. I was hoping for nice big muscular legs with cellulite on her hips, sorry. Thin legs on a woman is not my thing.
Ok
I give you five stars, but I don't really feel that way. These three chapters are too violent and insulting. I don't understand how you can treat a woman this way, even in fantasy. And especially your mother.
anon
to the other anonymous it's all about dominance, all women need to know their fucking place, if you don't know what that means that your too young to read this
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