This story was good--- but with the intensity of the first chapters, it seemed to pale in comparison. That is the downside to writing AMAZING stories... eventually it becomes hard to top yourself. We are going through the standard steps... fondling, oral, vaginal and anal. Next it will be group sex or sharing I suppose. I hope you are bigger than that Angel. I know you are! Uncle Max is still hot, but I feel like the heat in the story came from the shock of the situations. Now we are back in oral to vaginal to ass mode. With his daring and super erotic persona, Uncle Max should have more to offer, or to require. Maybe I have seen what there is to see, and now I'm bored? Surprise me! Shock me and work that Angel magic! Looking forward to your next chapter. :)
Well, part of the reason this story follows the standard steps is because that's what people tend to request =P It's just hard to get away from. I always intended there to be anal sex (I'm a fan of anal, so that's not too surprising) and I had a request for her to lose it while holding her cheeks spread open... which is what made this particular chapter different from other anal stories that I've written. It's hard to get away from the standard sequences sometimes and I don't often fight it too hard. There's probably only going to be one more chapter to Consequences and I already know it's not going to be something quite like what I've ever written before, although I'm sure other people have... so hopefully it will bring things back around to the level of the first chapters!
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Dirty anal girl
*****
Good story
Still hate anal, if he wants that I would have told him to go find another dude.
Grasping at straws?
This story was good--- but with the intensity of the first chapters, it seemed to pale in comparison. That is the downside to writing AMAZING stories... eventually it becomes hard to top yourself. We are going through the standard steps... fondling, oral, vaginal and anal. Next it will be group sex or sharing I suppose. I hope you are bigger than that Angel. I know you are! Uncle Max is still hot, but I feel like the heat in the story came from the shock of the situations. Now we are back in oral to vaginal to ass mode. With his daring and super erotic persona, Uncle Max should have more to offer, or to require. Maybe I have seen what there is to see, and now I'm bored? Surprise me! Shock me and work that Angel magic! Looking forward to your next chapter. :)
Standard Steps
Well, part of the reason this story follows the standard steps is because that's what people tend to request =P It's just hard to get away from. I always intended there to be anal sex (I'm a fan of anal, so that's not too surprising) and I had a request for her to lose it while holding her cheeks spread open... which is what made this particular chapter different from other anal stories that I've written. It's hard to get away from the standard sequences sometimes and I don't often fight it too hard. There's probably only going to be one more chapter to Consequences and I already know it's not going to be something quite like what I've ever written before, although I'm sure other people have... so hopefully it will bring things back around to the level of the first chapters!
SO HAWT!
Awsome scene! If I have any complaints about your work it's that sometimes the chapters are too short. :) Anyhow, well done.
Loved it......
So, can't wait to see what's next, oy, a baby, maybe. haha, forced preg. Whatever happens i'm sure i'll love.
love anal
wish i had uncles like that.
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