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Bounder Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31708/25/12

THE GAME RULES ARE CHANGING

and the players are not yet known. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by bruce2208/25/12

Fun Story

Nothing like having an "evil" person as the focus of a story. Do you remember the Maverick series on TV. I have noted that on TV soap operas that my wife watches that all evil persons usually develop a good side. And all heroes commit sins.

This world is a really interesting creation and could be in the SciFi/Fantasy classification.

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by Anonymous08/25/12

Potential

Interesting enough to want to see how the story line develops as it does have potential.

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by lundyson09/15/12

Card Game

Good addition to the series. I was wondering if the card game you mention is real or a mere fabrication of your mind. I know there are card games based on the tarot deck, but this one sounds very interesting. I would enjoy playing such a game if it existed. Thanks

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by Wisquejac01/14/14

even better...

second chapter. i think i will really enjoy this story. it has little sex, but doesn't really need it so far.

think...scoundrel sherlock holmes (with the ability to read thoughts and force his will upon weaker-minded individuals) stuck in a trap by 2 different persons/or groups. one side and really the only one he can trust with any hope, the Law and on the other side someone capable of having 2 young women murdered and also the pull to shut down the investigations of these murders. oh and they tried to kill our anti-hero too.

so he's stuck, but with luck, his brains and his gifts he just might solve the case and prove himself to be a better man than he thinks or wants to be.

good work. carry on.

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