Young Woman with Older Man Ch. 22

All good things come to an end

End's in Love

Awesome ending Susan. Thanks for the ride along thru the adventure in your writing!

Wrapped up with a neat little bow

Very nicely done Susan. A great fantasy for we middled aged people. Thank you for your beautiful story.

Very nice ending Susan. Thank You for the time you spent on our behalf in writing a very nice story. This is one of my best now.

awesome story loved every bit of it but end was great and makes you wonder is there such a thing as reincarnation?will be waiting on your next new story as i think all your stories ive read so far are great.thankyou

Superb story!

I've kept up all along and enjoyed your story very much usually reading each story the day it posted.

I got a little delayed and just got to the last chapter today. In keeping with the earlier chapters, an excellent conclusion.

It has been an emotional roller coaster for sure with some serious ups and downs, Lynn's death being the biggest of the downs. But in the end, unlike real life too often, here happiness reigns in the end.

Keep up the good work.

Good story

Hi Susan,
I read your story throgh in one sitting and enjoyed it. I like your style of writing and how you put some of yourself into the 'male' version of the naration. I will look forward to reading nearly all of your stories and certainly any new ones you post from now on.

Very Good Story!!!

Susan, I loved the entire story, it is very rare that I make it through an entire series, only because they are usually the same thing over and over again. This story was completely different, You teased us and led us down a path with so many plot twists and turns that it kept me wanting more.

As I have said before, you are a very good story teller and need to keep it up. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Better with a second reading

Susan
My appreciation for this series grows with each with each re-read. You have done a masterful job of creating a Hope for a Love lost. Wishing you Well Always.

Susan

This whole series has left me breathless! A truly wonderful read, covering some occasionally difficult areas with great skill.

Fantastic series!

Absolutely loved all the chapters.

SHE ROCKS!!

I was totally blown away by the way Susan developed her characters for this story. It was a really good tale, told with feelings, I believe that Susan felt in places throughout the story..A Recommended read to all who enjoy Erotic Fiction

i cant imagine the emotions as a writer that you must have went through while writing this series. i know that you have taken me through horny,happy sadness, depression, laughing, hopeful, contemplative all in one story. you were correct in that this was a long story but i cant imagine any place that you could delete without taking something from your writings. all i can say is great job susan!!!

john

awsome story.

What a different approach to a story. I really liked the different ways you had the different people tell their thoughts. it reminded me how internal dialog happens in ones mind.
Thank you for a great read.