All Comments on 'My Summer Camp Journal 2012'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A Successful Camp-aign

I enjoyed this very much thank you RHF.

Brings back memories of my own youth camps.

Except how come mine weren't like this!?

Maybe I should have kept a journal. LMAO.

LibrandesireLibrandesireover 11 years ago
Excellent!

I loved the way you developed the girl's personality. And I enjoyed the humour too.

The story reminded me of several girls I knew when I was that age. Like the story, they were interesting and stimulating. Sadly, I never dated any. Now I know what I missed. How bad are YOU? :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Way too "American Pie" for my tastes

"And this one time..... At band Camp....." You have a really good writing style, but this story seemed so childish to me. The humor was unexpected and very welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thank you

Enjoyed reading this story.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SUMMER TIME CAMPING

from a female point of view. Not too much difference from young adults. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good job

It was a fun read. I thought camp was for two weeks or it was in my days.Imagine the possibilities.. Loved the humor also. Well written.

annanovaannanovaover 11 years ago
Very fun read

Too bad camp was never like that when I went! I enjoyed the enthusiasm of your narrator. What a gift to be able to write with such a young voice.

Good luck with the contest. :)

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 11 years ago
Camp was never this much fun

We did some crafts, archery, and hiking. Where is this camp, anyway? I must have attended the wrong one.

Great story--I enjoyed it a lot. Good luck in the contest.

goodgurlgetsbadgoodgurlgetsbadover 11 years ago
Hotter than a heat wave !!!

Your story reminded me of my lil summer fling- nothing as naughty though I wish I was this BADDD - LOVED your story btw

EllafunEllafunover 11 years ago
Fun Read!

I love your style! Great story, RH&F!!

zack1981zack1981over 11 years ago
So hot

What a great short story. I loved it and it took no time to get me off!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Rock hard

Man you sure can write a story you had my cock hard as a rock the whole time baby

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