by RedHairedandFriendly
I enjoyed this very much thank you RHF.
Brings back memories of my own youth camps.
Except how come mine weren't like this!?
Maybe I should have kept a journal. LMAO.
I loved the way you developed the girl's personality. And I enjoyed the humour too.
The story reminded me of several girls I knew when I was that age. Like the story, they were interesting and stimulating. Sadly, I never dated any. Now I know what I missed. How bad are YOU? :-)
"And this one time..... At band Camp....." You have a really good writing style, but this story seemed so childish to me. The humor was unexpected and very welcome.
from a female point of view. Not too much difference from young adults. TK U MLJ LV NV
It was a fun read. I thought camp was for two weeks or it was in my days.Imagine the possibilities.. Loved the humor also. Well written.
Too bad camp was never like that when I went! I enjoyed the enthusiasm of your narrator. What a gift to be able to write with such a young voice.
Good luck with the contest. :)
We did some crafts, archery, and hiking. Where is this camp, anyway? I must have attended the wrong one.
Great story--I enjoyed it a lot. Good luck in the contest.
Your story reminded me of my lil summer fling- nothing as naughty though I wish I was this BADDD - LOVED your story btw
What a great short story. I loved it and it took no time to get me off!!
Man you sure can write a story you had my cock hard as a rock the whole time baby