Claiming Marc

Very nicely done!

She put him in his place 'good and proper'! He'll thank her for it later - in all sorts of ways ;) ! Please consider telling us about some of them! Five stars - thank you.

Thank you.

A good tale, I liked it, well written and a very good read. Keep writing.

Really Enjoyed!

Really enjoyed your story. I really think women are more ruthless than men when handing out punishment. I thought I would enjoy my first punishment spanking from my wife, but it was brutal with over 100 whacks at full force till her arm gave out. Much harder and longer than any spanking a man has given me. Hoping to read more of his submission.

Great story, i really loved how she LIKED doing it to him

I hope you continue this story MS Jess. And that his punishments become more severy aqnd prolonged. A great beginning.

Thank you so much for the feedback!! This is my first story. Working on a part II... It will definately be more intense! :)

is good

this one story sexy. very sexy. better than watching old neigborh lady masterbatering it last satruday nihgt.

Very intense

Well written and intense. Great job in bringing an erotic razors edge to the story

Excellent start! 5*****

I hope you continue this.

Whoa

She had to be worth it for that, but he maybe enjoyed it? Part of me, drooling down between my legs, seems to think so.

You make it seem so real!

Your account of how the changed relationship comes about -- her breaking it off, him crying and begging for forgiveness, and her ultimatum -- is utterly convincing. That's my favorite part of an erotic story and you do it very well. Thank you!