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wow
really great story was wanting to here more and more :)
Unfinished
The two still must go on, and the comment from the demon to Demetri about how he didn't have much time...was left unanswered as to much time for what. Demetri's powers were leaving him...he could not go through the ropes to save Ember, but he could morph back to the castle
She cannot live in that realm forever so a decision and more of the story must be told. *smiles* Well done.
I need more
*****
I think he is turning human
OMG! MOOOOORE!!!
I loved this story, please more!!! It made me sad, it made me happy, it's written in such a manner that it caught me and once I started, I couldn't stop! Please continue. You are great.
Oh please don't let this be the last.
Your storie's are to good to end and this one seemed like an ending. Please let thier be more.
more
plz write chapter 8
more on the way!
it's not over... just super busy right now. but there are some delicious scenes on their way!
loved it
i loved it i dont know y u havent writen more. i look for it all the time. i think you should really do something with it then just put it up on this site dont get me wrong i like to read it here and all but u have something and i dont think you should stop.
Arghhh
I come here everyday to see if you posted chapter 8...and you haven't >:(
Post more!
I check everyday it's like the biggest disappointment ever when I don't find chapter eight. Just post more pleeeeaaassseeeee!
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I have literally come back every single day since you posted this chapter waiting for chapter 8, and nothing. What is going on?!?!? I'm getting a little tired of waiting :/
I'm really tired of waiting for another chapter but I love it.
Maybe, just maybe...
there isn't another chapter.
Look how perfectly this one ended.
They both will heal together, and for the moment, they are not in danger.
I, too, look sometimes...for a next chapter, but if the author never writes another our imaginations can continue for suggababy. See the beauty in it.
The gift that has been given us, is just that, a gift. Do not demand more. Be thankful for what we have.
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