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by Anonymous

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by tazz31708/24/12

A VERY ROMANTIC ELEGY

of a romance began, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by demure10108/24/12

Beautiful and heartfelt

I can feel your joy and your pain... 5 points for me.

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by Ashesh908/25/12

how poignantly bitter-sweet

this partin' !

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