As far as it went. Seemed a great start to another of your "longer" stories as some commenters call them, but I appreciate for their better, fuller development of plot, characters and overall story. Maybe I just have a longer attention span.
It's well written, but the sister evokes no sympathy at all. She's just a slut. (Male sluts who fuck a different woman every time, are sluts, too, but we give them different, much more flattering names.)
The way I see it you could take this in two directions. The first, and unfortunately the most likely, is that Meghan and eventually the extended family gets involved. The second is that he un-sluts his sister, she falls in love with him and they live happily ever after.
That's up to you, but try not to ruin it, as you did with 'Sleepover'.
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Anonymous11/19/15
sisterly love
Good story a little short but good.Write some more about Jessie and Luke.
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Anonymous12/12/15
WOW
what a skanky slut. EVERY STD in the book!
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Anonymous08/27/16
wow this was steemy hot!!!!!
I would love it if you would make a second and a third to this one ,the second about the sister teaching the brother all the trix of the sex trade and how to please a women .
the third about the sister hooking brother up with one of her friend and the brother and
new girl fall in love with the sister finding some one to in the third . just some ideas I am no wrighter but have the ideas for story just cant putt them on paper like you I love this troy and I think 5 is to low for this story it should score 9 at least , you have the gift that you for sharing it with all of us .
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Slut Sister
His sister wasn't worth the affection. Should have gone from jealous to disgusted in two nights.
Liked the story.....
As far as it went. Seemed a great start to another of your "longer" stories as some commenters call them, but I appreciate for their better, fuller development of plot, characters and overall story. Maybe I just have a longer attention span.
nice story
i hope you add another part to this story it has a great beginning
More
More chapters please one of my favourite story's by you
this is a fantastic story i wish you would continue it!!
More please !
Just don't leave it/them at this stage !
Looking forward to Chapter 2, when ever you're ready - thanks.
Chapter 2 yes, but no more than that
It's well written, but the sister evokes no sympathy at all. She's just a slut. (Male sluts who fuck a different woman every time, are sluts, too, but we give them different, much more flattering names.)
The way I see it you could take this in two directions. The first, and unfortunately the most likely, is that Meghan and eventually the extended family gets involved. The second is that he un-sluts his sister, she falls in love with him and they live happily ever after.
That's up to you, but try not to ruin it, as you did with 'Sleepover'.
sisterly love
Good story a little short but good.Write some more about Jessie and Luke.
WOW
what a skanky slut. EVERY STD in the book!
wow this was steemy hot!!!!!
I would love it if you would make a second and a third to this one ,the second about the sister teaching the brother all the trix of the sex trade and how to please a women .
the third about the sister hooking brother up with one of her friend and the brother and
new girl fall in love with the sister finding some one to in the third . just some ideas I am no wrighter but have the ideas for story just cant putt them on paper like you I love this troy and I think 5 is to low for this story it should score 9 at least , you have the gift that you for sharing it with all of us .
another wow
what a scum of the earth slut. why would anyone want to fuck that diseased whore???
That was good.
But it deserves more chapters.
Hehe
U devious bastard lol, I loved it....😊
So far, so good
This definitely needs a follow up!
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