Roommates

Amazing story

Incredibely erotic and very fun to read. Great job on this.

More to come?

Would love to see more. Very erotic and very sexy. Love it. Good work.

MORE!!!!!

For the love of god .... please continue!!!

my panties are really wet....this was hot you just have to write another chapter

Incredible incest ! bro/sis

you would have to mention that his little bro with a tap of 11 inches and balls like balls of tennis full with cum for his/her sexy big sister with the small she-cat and large ass round

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BEST EVER.

MOOOOOOOORE.

Feed me moooore. This was so good, I had my first erection in 2 FKN YEARS from ED. WOW.

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AWESOME

This was really great all i can say is more more more.
I think ch 2 should be even better then befor the second round when he leans to eat pussy the first time more more more.
Then he takes her again for the second time when he really get on her from the front & pounds her into the bed & she cums 2 or3 more times. Then he turns her over to get her doggy & gets even depper into that sweet hot tigt pussy & so deep she think she is in her tummy she just goes over the edge 3 or 4 more time then he blows his load. As she passes out from his strong hard shot into her pussy & wakes with him washing her face with a cold rag she is in Heaven. I have wrote half of it for u in short form more more more.

Very Good

A good read, I look forward to reading more of their sexual exploration, keep writing.

Unbelieveable , But Good

Hard to believe she wouldn't know who she was fucking, even if she was well wasted. She'd have to remember the guy walking out on her, and bro giving her comfort. If she'd been too drunk to remember, she wouldn't have even cried, and she could see who she was with in the morning light. And I can't believe she wouldn't have fantasized about him after checking out his package, even if she did accept all the lies about family sex. Otherwise, fine!

way to unrealistic

couldn't finish it was so stupid, no way he would hang around after the first morning. he would be sure to get up before her and get home in time for bed so as to avoid her. after the first time she brought someone home he would either find a friend to room with or talk to the parents about a place of his own. to dumb to be worth reading.

Fantastic!

I'd love another chapter,She was still hung over and slept with a different 2 guys every week!

WTF

Like every bitchy female, she's a total hypocrite. As if she actually cares who's attached to her next dick? "Damn you! Incest is bad!" then "Ok let's fuck!"

So tasteful

I enjoyed every moment of this story. Please make another chapter, this girl is on need of something meaningful and her brother can give that to her. Very well done. I'm smiling really hard right now because it was such a good read.

awesome

it was so good my pussy started to react &I just had to play with myself. it resulted in me cumming!!!! I want more pleaseeee!!

Great story. Keep it going.

OMG best bro-sis incest story (of college level love) i have ever read...GREAT pls keep it going...i only have one complaint and that is there isnt a part two yet!!!

Well Done

This was very well-written. It had great build-up of the brother and sister and it actually seems like it could happen in real life. Please continue this story. It was impressive.

Not up to your usual standard

There were virtually NO buildup, NO preliminaries, NO foreplay. Just 0 - 60 in nothing flat. Too bad. I love your stories.

very good story, had it all, sex, humor, tension. please write more

blind

how does one not realize who they are fucking?

I love it! very good!

i liked it very much! i would really love to see a part two to this story, and see this relationship develop, you with the friends of Jessie meeting his younger brother, or the two of them having a tryst in the college bathrooms, something like that?

I would love that fantasy

Wow I was hard from start to Finnish please please follow on
Maybe she brings a lesbian friend in to join them but it was a great story
Wish I had a fantasy like that to fulfill x well done

Nice

Very pleasant reading! I like it! Thank you.

HOT

Going to stroke it now - I was hard from start to finish of this story. Hope there's more to cum!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Make another! This one was AMAZING

Good Story

I liked it, the only thing I would suggest is to make the ending a little longer. The story built up very well, but then it was over, like a movie that is 10 minutes shorter than it should be.

dynamite

really great story you should do a follow up of it

Nicely done

The story left the reader to make up their own ending.

I was wondering how Luke was going to convince his sister that what he felt for her was real love and not just sex.

Nice

Good story, with a nice ending.

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ROOMMATES needs to have another chapter or 2

Sequel Plz

I enjoyed it, where's the next one? :P

sequel, please

I insist! What a great story; all your stories are, apparently!

dude roommates needs to have a chapter 2-what ever chapter you ant to stop.

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I agree with the others id really like more chapters! You just got them together ....

what a disgusting whore. he'd better get checked for diseases, but 's prolly too late. He's got herpes for sure

Both sick and dangerous

I agree with 1/05/13: the kid had best get himself to the clinic to be checked for diseases. He has now officially fucked all of that parade of losers as well as everybody they've fucked. If he cares about his sister, he'd better have her tested too. Incest is one thing, but her rampant promiscuity ruins everything. Score: 0.

Wicked

Alright, yeah.

Have to agree with some of the comments here, she was a slut. Frankly I would rather sleep on the streets and pay $1000 for a prostitute as least he would know she was disease free

So righteous ......

... oh dear. So many sanctimonious sentiments from so many purists! Remember, folks - it's a fantasy! Well done, Slam - keep them coming!

Hey, if you don't want to read about incest . . .

then don't read it! If a fantasy world includes something you don't like, then quit reading. The author isn't telling you to do this or advocating that this is good practice, he is just writing a story. Damn! Talk about uptight, take a deep breath and jack or jill off. You'll feel better and the whole world will be a lot rosier!!

Roommates: (Luke and Jessie - Brother and Sister)

For a brother (male) that's near nineteen years old to be so literally fucking ignorant about females, he sure as hell didn't hesitate to take on his slut whore roommate--just because she was a female.

He confessed his "always in love with her", but he certainly didn't have the balls to tell her what a whore she has been. And how fucking stupid it is of her, being the all time expert with all the men she fucked--for free--to think she wasn't having any natural effect on her brother, and her naked all the time around her brother.

Her feigning to be too damned drunk to not remember is not believeable! The way she loved to fuck, having her pussy eaten, fucking cowboy and missionary, and just once she lets a guy fuck her doggy (where she doesn't see his face), does not do justice to whores! She had been pulling the same shit, partying, drunk, bringing some gutter swinging dick home several nights each week, and then suddenly not remember the one time a guy walked out on her when she couldn't perform. No dice; it doesn't compute. However, that being said, Luke was also a dumb shit for "greasing her cunt" the first time he was naked in her bed without the benefit of any foreplay.

There's no doubt they're both from the same gene pool.

Sequel?

This really, really...REALLY needs a sequel. It's hot, easily followed, moves in a nice pace, my interest was maintained through-out the story and it walks the line between realistic and porno really well. While I have trouble imagining her reaction in the end in real life, as well as anyone being so naïve that they see their brother as sexual as a cupboard, or a cup, it still had realism to it like her inevitable break-down or her brothers chickenshit attitude concerning the proverbial elefant in the room (let's face it, love or not, it was his sister). I would really like to see where it goes from here.

what a situation

I normally don't get too judgmental about characters in stories, but this chick exasperates the hell out of me. She drunkenly does him, then gives him static for not stopping it. He could have, granted, but responsibility goes both ways.

Dude

Man, I also wouldn't have fucked Meghan seeing as how I get disgusted with sluts. But after they fucked I knew it'd end well and I was actually hoping for a sequel.. But I don't think it's gonna happen, though.

Sequel! Please!

Damn, great story! It really needs a sequel though, too much of this story was spent with her fucking other dudes. I'd really like to see where it goes from here. Preferably no outside partners, it takes away from the relationship when the story just turns into an all out orgy.

You know, she is REALLY a bitch. Day 1, she says she's going to parade around naked and bring guys home whenever she feels like it. I get the guys part, its part of having a roommate, even if it is your family, you deal with it. Naked, sure, realistically if it was played off as a completely non-sexual way, then it would be totally his fault for getting turned on.

You don't play the incest card when YOU were the one specifically parading around naked, pointedly asking him to look at your privates, talking about sex very often, not at all trying to hide just how promiscuous you are, telling your brother not only to show off his boner, but grabbing it to. Then, later on, YOU straddle HIM. Take all of that into account and hell, if he didnt have the hots for you before, I wouldnt blame him for it after all this!

Yet she sees him as a brother. No, scratch that, sisters that are totally grossed out by incest wouldnt be telling their brother to check out their tits and pussy, and then kneeling down to pull their brothers cock out just to look at it. If you wanted to "know how to describe it to your friends" have one of your slutty friends fuck him and tell you. Sister doesnt need to give the cock a rub down to showcase its worth. Let the women who actually intend to find out what size he is, or, you know, just ASK him.

The story was hot, and I was liking it... but I was also having to skim it since the way the sister and brother are, their personalities around each other just... make me start to lose it. Awkward, embarrassing situations in the way that makes you roll your eyes or facepalm dont actually make for a good lead in to a great story.

The way that the sister handled having sex with her brother... I was honestly hoping she fucked him on purpose, like she'd been leading him on this whole time, but didnt really want to just come out and jump her brother. But no, she straddled him, fucked and moaned, and came all over him, realized who he was and went straight to "HOW DARE YOU RAPE ME?! You're a sick god damned perv, with your erotic thoughts for your sister! I cant BELIEVE you'd even TRY to get a hard on for me! What on Earth led you to think that any of this was ok!?"

Apparently sis doesnt have the best memory for details. Give her this story, her new reaction would be "...Oh... my god. I am my brothers cock tease. He's lucky not to be sporting permanent blue balls after all this. Could I have BEEN any more of a bitch to him? 'Oh please brother, could you yank the sex toy out of my cunt? I just painted my nails and dont want to get my jizz all over it. Be a dear and wash it too, its been put through the ringer!' If our places were switched, I'd have thrown one of those bitches off him and rode him myself. Omg I cant believe this..."

The sister is clearly hot, the brother, hell anyone would want to fuck her, and seems most have. "I'm just trying to find the right one." Doesnt mean you have to try them all to do it. She gives absolutely no thought to her brother. Might as well name him Harry Potter. Now shut up and go back to your cupboard, sister has to fuck everyone except you so that your own virginity will pound down on you like a steel cage, with only offers of sloppy, SLOPPY, seconds (50ths more like it) with a whore friend who probably wont have any standards. And he is just this... meek, horny, cowardly... if he werent slobbering over himself every time he thought about his sister, I'd have called him angsty too.


This... isnt a bad story, but it isnt really a good one either. Had a lot of build up, GOOD build up, really made you think something amazing was going to happen. Then SURPRISE! Twist ending, she makes him feel like shit after he had the best, and only, sex of his life. And just before he had any thoughts of wandering into heavy traffic to relieve himself of his shame, she comes out, calls him a bastard and a btw, I want your cock so shut up and fuck me, otherwise we go back to the whole "you raped me, go drown yourself." bit. I expected more. I was HOPING for more, and ended up with less then a real story. This is a very, very long awkwardly done intro to the real story, which is buried in there, somewhere. If this DOES get a sequel, I'll be sure to read it though, with high hopes for it.

This does demand a sequel where their relationship develops!

This was hot but too short. I agree with an earlier comment that Luke was too ignorant about sex for a 19 year old. Thanks for sharing.

Anon 4/1/14 comment captured my thoughts too

The prose is fine. It's the plot that's a bit too psycho, unless the sister is supposed to be totally narcissistic and psychotic. The sequel that would flow most naturally from this story is a murder/suicide. Bummer.

dude please add more to this. You leave at a cliffhanger I'm waiting for you to finish it