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by tazz31708/24/12

WITH IN US ALL

are several elements opening up in stages of our maturity, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by tazz31708/24/12

#2 FOR D.J.

whenever you submit multi stories they all seem to have a connecting theme and they are good, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by demure10108/24/12

Another beautiful one -

Knowing yourself completely seems utterly impossible...

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